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Reviews for Irresistible

By : Rina76
  • From RJaneyP on February 02, 2010
    You did good... great story! Percing to the core! Lovely messy violent exctasy, I didn't want them to let go of each other. Wonder if M will write a song about the beautiful silver-haired stranger, who seduced him and breached him to the deepest core. If I was a song writer... I would... just so I never forget the experience! Yazoo is sex on wheels, alway such a hot babe! I doubt anyone could forget one night with him... ever! G, right on the spot!
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  • From schwaerze on November 22, 2009
    Okay, finally I get to sit down with a nice cup of tea and some cake to read this marvellous chapter again ^___^ I´ll review here, since I can´t review on ff.net with log-in, and because you need to get more reviews here!!! So in case I repeat myself please excuse me ;)

    First off I must say again, that I like it very much that you write in present tense. It needs a bit getting used to it, but it is so much more vivid and closer. It´s like it is really happening now, right before my eyes.

    Miyavi is tall? Somehow he always stroke me a bit as small and cute XDDD But Yazoo´s right, it might be because he´s really thin. I loved that you described all the tattos and such!

    Haha, no adam´s apple XD IT was funny how confused Yazoo was about tha and his own sexuality XDDD Poor thing. His train of thought was very rational and relatively calm, just as expected of him. And it sounded almost as if poor Yazzy was a bit afraid to have turned hetero, haha!

    Oooh, lipgloss *drools* I think it really suits Miyavi! He doesn´t look awkard with it, like some men do. Since his face is really rather feminine and he doesn´t have a beard or so it suits him really well, I think. On the other hand it´d be interesting to see him without make-up for once too, I wonder if he was still as pretty?

    Haha, so Yazoo intends to have wet dreams about M.? Sweeet!

    Awww! Yazoo is admiring him and Miyavi gets impatient XDDD He really is fidgety :D If someone like Yazoo´d admire me I´d be stockstill and woldn´t dare to breath (not that this was every going to happen, mind you).

    And it´s so cute how Miyavi confesses XD He really seems a bit childish compared to his rather demanding behaviiour before, but he does seem to have a conscience! And that he turns un-straight for Yazoo XDDD AND how confidently Yazoo states that it´s nothing new for him that people turn gay for him *roflmao* What a pair!!!!!!

    Eheh, Miyavi really likes to play ‘hard to get’, doesn´t he? He´s lucky Yazoo´s so patient XD


    So cute, how he totally jumps at Yazoo´s provocation XD Rather hot- tempered, isn´t he? But at least it did the trick! Well, kinda XD Its funny to see those two pretty boys be so clumsy in their first kiss. But what a sexy kiss it is!!!

    Haha, it´s interesting how Miyavi get´s kind of objectified and has to be protected from Kadaj and his sneaky fingers XD Yazoo really doesn´t see his partner much as a person of free will, does he? And he seems rather possessive…

    It so cracked me up when Miyavi stopped him like that!!!! “You´re kinda wasting your time” EPIC!!! I love how cocky he is! And Yazoo even allowes it, he must really be captivated!
    But it is sweet that M. asks in return what Yazoo likes ^__^

    Awwwwwww, Yazoo finally feels manly again XD Well, it must be annoying to be questioned every time…

    Hehehe, the name questioning was funny too XD Yazoo really is patient!!!

    As you can most certainly tell I´m totally hooked on this story and can barely wait to read the next part, because I know it´ll be breathtaking and wonderful again!

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  • From darkduchess1 on September 12, 2009
    Omg that was the best story i really cant wait for the next part and i know have a new ultament pairing YazooXMiyavi! i love it so much just imagening this stuff happening is so hot and miyavi-san is so adorable. again im really looking forward to the next part

    -darkduchess
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  • From ANON - Hakucho on September 08, 2009
    Hi Rina76, Very nice story and I might actually be so blunt as to say, it has a perfect ending here. I know, probably schwarze wants more details, but the thing is there is somehow a perfect balance of satisfaction and frustration within the reader as well as the characters. Sometimes, I guess, there is more impact left when you've had a taste of the candy yet not been able to finish it off. The mind goes wild and just wors fervently with all the possibilities. Anyway, nicely written as always and you have a very nice way of expressing and giving life to your characters. :) Very well done.

    H.
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