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Reviews for Some Twisted Science

By : LuMorsAza
  • From salarta on August 19, 2010
    Hey there.

    I'm one that's perfectly open to non-con situations like these, both for a dark delight and the fact that for many characters in this series a non-con situation is truer to their character than something like "Tifa has sex with anything that moves of her own free will with no build-up." While Aeris' (I know, Square-Enix promotes Aerith, I played it with Aeris so I'll keep viewing it that way) scenario went further than I usually like, there's absolutely nothing wrong with going really graphic. It serves the atmosphere and underlying point of the entire series of fic appropriately.

    I feel that I need to point out something however: there were a couple grammar mistakes in the second chapter with Aeris. The two I noticed were "and which she couldn't see them" where you meant 'while' instead of 'which', and "neatly switched up around her belly button." where you meant 'stitched' and not 'switched'. I'm sure running it through a quick spell and grammar check in Microsoft Word or something similar would take care of at least some of that.

    Wrapping up with more personal thoughts. I really do like the crazy Hojo using the women as science experiments angle you have here. It plays on some of the corruption and transformation kinks I have. They're a tad predictable, but you take the Aeris one in a slightly stronger turn (Hojo actually altered her biology instead of just setting Red loose on her) and they fit the characters well. Slightly disappointed with Tifa's because it's just "Tifa's boobs get bigger and lactate" at the moment which isn't as major as Aeris being altered to give birth to a wolf-like animal, but I can see it turning into something good when expanded on. Hopefully these next ideas I'm tossing out don't cause creative overload or kill some of your excitement to continue. I hope that Scarlet figures into what else you do with Tifa considering the rivalry they had in FF7 that's all but forgotten by most FF7 fans these days, and I hope you give Elena a turn in Hojo's experiments too. Jesse and Lucrecia also seem like good options, along with lots of other small-role characters.

    I know, lots of text there. It's not like there's any other written porn on the FF section of this site in the past month that's been worth a read for someone who doesn't like yaoi. :P Thanks for writing and sharing this, I look forward to more.
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