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Reviews for Lesson 5

By : schwaerze
  • From ANON - fyrbyrd074 on October 09, 2010
    Yazoo, a virgin!!??!! Now that was a surprise, Can't wait to read more!!! Promise to get back to mine, an emergancy renovation on my house has held me up lately.
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  • From ANON - crayonbox on October 07, 2010
    Yes, yes, yes...I mean, nooooooooooo! Evil, yet great clifhanger. You got me sitting on the edge of my chair, not sure whether to compliment you on another chapter welldone (although the mayonaise seriously grossed me out. I like it on my french fries, but on anything else, it's poison)or to threaten you into writing faster. Nah, I'm glad. The mental picture is delicious. Angie's back full of red lines and Yazoo deliciouly spread eagle. Purrrr....X3
    The description for the kid doing the dance revolution part made me laugh. Poor Angael thinking the kid is having an attack (although I thought the same thing the first time I saw someone dance).
    I dislike the mall part (You should have dropped the kid, Angael. Punks these days. *growl*), but I like the arcade part. Angael, oldtimer that he is, enjoying a shootergame is awesome.
    Sephiroth not being allowed in the military kitchen is great. It makes me giggle, knowing the General is trying to be all perfect with spiffy rules and all (people IRON socks?!) and yet has no idea how poisoness his coffee is for normal people.
    I'm bouncing on my chair right now. I demand a chapter 6. This story needs a chapter 6. The story is not done without a chapter 6 (7,8,9,10 etc. :P). Everytime I'm reading a chapter, you make me fall in love with this pairing all over again.
    I'll patiently wait for the next chapter...or try to. ;P
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  • From Faoiltierna on October 07, 2010
    A cliffhanger! Oh my!

    And in such a...suggestible point of the story! :-)

    I do so love these two. They're just...so right even when everything says they should be wrong :-)

    Can't wait to see what happens next! ;-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2010
    God that mayo restaurant so so freakin' gross. I loved how Yazoo kept dragging Angeal to these places he knew he wouldn't enjoy. The foul-mouthed hello kitty girl was just too funny. I was so happy to see you updated.
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