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Reviews for Into Esthar

By : Chemotaxis
  • From Vovo on May 09, 2011
    Great chapter, as always! Every action and emotion was so believable. I really liked the part when Squall’s built up anger ended up in that punch, that must have hurt a lot, but I think that Seifer’s a lot more hurt seeing Squall leaving. I hope you have time to do everything you need and to write, of course! And thank you for the doujinshi! You’re really kind!
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  • From ANON - zephyr9 on May 02, 2011
    what can i say, i've read all the chapters countless time.. this story is gripping - very realistic and full of emotion.. don't know how you guys do it but the storyline and narration is addictive.. whatever you guys do, no matter how busy you guys are at the moment, please don't give up on this story.. big big fan over here ;)
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  • From ANON - william on May 01, 2011
    awww so sad ;-; They always have to make things so damn hard on themselves xD But wonderfully written, as always. I can't wait for the next update even if you'll be busy. :3
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  • From Vovo on April 21, 2011
    I can’t really do anything here but praise your work on this story. I can only see positive points in the text. I liked the description of the aftereffects of the drug and the descriptions in general were really well-done (something very characteristical of your work). Oh the "It had been amazing" part was really funny, and I really laughed along with Hyne and his buddies when Seifer remembered when he came.Waiting for the next chapter!

    P.S.The scanned doujinshis seem really tempting.
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  • From ANON - william on April 09, 2011
    But it's so true! X3 You're very welcome. This is my hands down favorite fic on here, & so well written. I love it.
    Loved the last chapter too. I always try & somewhat like Rinoa...but since she always seems to somehow get in the way of Squall & Seifer I just can't help but despise her xD Always in the way of the two getting together. I guess the angst is worth it though X3 I can't wait to see how Squall responds to all of this, & what Seifer does :]
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  • From ANON - william on April 03, 2011
    LOVE IT!!! ugh the best sex scene i've ever read between the two hands down. EVER! so amazing. those two are so hot on the drug xD It's amazing how lax Squall was compared to usual. Me & my boyfriend read it & loved it. Props to you guys on this chapter [& on the entire thing] :3 Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From Vovo on March 27, 2011
    I’m very pleased with the effects of Avalanche on them! It was hot and meaningful. It’s good to see Squall letting go of his restraints and Seifer having the opportunity to fulfill his desire. I’m happy they had fun before the angst to come... Which makes me feel sorry for them being sad, though I love to see them suffer... Well, I hope they have more sex to compensate for it later!
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  • From Madisuzy on March 26, 2011
    That was incredible!!! Amazingly hot and... damn, my brain has turned into happy gooey mush! Gah, you two have mad skills... and I need a cigarette. lol. Thanks for writing and sharing!
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  • From Vovo on March 08, 2011
    I only had time to read it today and... It’s wonderful, as always! The story is flowing very well, and it’s so easy to keep reading. I’m really excited now that Seifer and Squall are together in the apartment, I wonder what will happen between them, I hope the drug helps! I think Seifer was dressed in a really sexy way. It’s very cool to imagine he’s always fantasized about Squall and his belts.

    I’ll be waiting for the next chapter!

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  • From ANON - Lauren on March 08, 2011
    OMG. Squall's losing it. He just took a drug that he knows nothing about. XD This is excellent so far!
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  • From ANON - william on March 04, 2011
    XD Aww Squally. He's so cute. Trying to match Seifer & take the drugs. It'll be interesting to see what happens. I have a few guesses but I don't know if any of them will be right. At first I just thought the drugs were like ecstasy, but I could be wrong. Watch them be an aphrodisiac xD
    I'm excited to see what happens next! Lovely & wonderfully written, as always.
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  • From ANON - william on February 18, 2011
    I LOVE the story so far!!! I can't wait for the next chapter :3
    & Rinoa...bleh. Though I did somewhat enjoy her & Squall's part, more than other fics that involve her. it was craftily done :3
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  • From Vovo on January 23, 2011
    Oh, God, you write amazingly. Your descriptions are very very good. Ahahhahahahhahah, I loved the look of indifference Squall gave Rinoa when she asked if he had given the dog the tuna thing. I think your Squall is very in-character, I like that. You two, keep going!
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  • From ANON - Aerawyn on January 13, 2011
    I wanted to be the first to review! ^_^

    To the readers: I've had the honor of editing this story for Chem and Wolkje, and I can hardly stand the time in between chapters when I can't wait for the next one. They're both fantastic writers, this story is going to be amazing, and I encourage everyone to read it! Their characterizations of Squall and Seifer are fresh and believable, the storyline isn't cliche and boring like so many I've read, and their storytelling is just so enticing. I'll stop there; the writing really speaks for itself.

    Ladies, it's a pleasure, and I look forward to working with and for you in the future!
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