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Reviews for Ravaged by the Ronso

By : TentacleFan
  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2012
    Oh, and if you allow me a little advice: why don't you put more ambient, movement and body descriptions when the smut is going on? It does wonders to the color and sexiness of the scene. Going for a full sensorial experience, instead of remaining solely with the classic porn camera angles.

    Just a suggestion. Keep going, your stories are great
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2012
    Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Ryvius on November 19, 2012
    Great start. Hope to see Yuna get pregnant.

    These stories are always weird for me. On the one hand, I want to see the girls escape their predicament and get a 'happy' ending.

    On the other hand, the smut they go through is so enjoyable.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From kadajclone on November 17, 2012
    This just gets better with each chapter, 5 stars. Love the pace it's going at and your ability to write smut is superb. like that Yuna is still resisting and wonder how Rikku will fare. I guess at this point Paine is our 2 lovely ladies last chance at escape, that is if they even want to escape by the time Paine makes an appearance and aren't broken ;D.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2012
    I'm glad I decided to check the ff section today. I've been hoping someone would make a fic like this since playing the mt gagazet story in ffx-2. I'm really loving this story so far and it's pretty unique, haven't seen a fic with this plot before. I hope you continue.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2012
    Good start, basic but sexy. Would like to see Yuna pregnant and still getting mounted. Then Paine could get captured and bred as her co-mate.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From kadajclone on November 10, 2012
    very interesting and very very hot, it would be sweet if you made this into a muti chapt fic.
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