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Reviews for Final Fantasy 7. Tifa Lockhart: Journey to Midgar.

By : Nickamano
  • From Thundercloud on May 28, 2022

    Review of part 2 (chapter 12 -26) and part 3 (27 to 34) of the story. Part 2 follows the actual trip to Midgar while part 3 describes what happens Tifa in Midgar until the game begins.

    The really good thing about these parts is the really clever uses of dream sequences to enter erotic scenes when Tifa are in locations when such material are not easy to fit the narrative. I would actually go as far as saying these scenes are the main essence of the story.

    From another perspetive the dreams are needed since the trials of the trip are rather mundane. Quite a lot of mountains to climb and animals to fight as Tifa moves past all the classic locations of the game. At one point there is a fun contest she enters and some events happening on ship that is kind of interesting but in a story named "Journey to Midgar" I would have expected more challenging trials to overcome during the journey.

    When Tifa finally gets to Midgar she has the very extreme string of bad luck to make things harder. Anyone playing the game of course knows where she will end up, something that removes a bit of the thrill of the difficulties the encounters. Putting the classic trials in the story in the journey itself before Midgar might IMHO have worked better.

    At the end of day I would say that part 1 is excellent while part 2 och part 3 are not of quite the same quality...but we get lots of Tifa being badass and very solid explanations why Tifa would get involved in Avalance in Midgar. That the story ends with final dream sex scene is kind of expected, but I was blown away how smoking hot it was. Easily making journey worth the read.


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  • From Thundercloud on August 13, 2020

    After playing the remake I felt the urge to go looking for some Tifa erotic fun and ended reading this story...or rather I read part1 and the intermission before part 2 (this is the first 11 posted chapters on AFF).

    Reading the whole novel in one session would take quite some effort. Not that I should complain with my own set of novel-length stories posted on AFF....

    About the length one thing to note for readers considering to read this is that this story does not have even sized chapters. Quite many chapters in the beginning is longer than later chapters so reading the whole story is not as challening as first can be assumed.

    Turning over to the actual reviewy part of the review this story is a quite solid piece of story telling. As an example my own memories of Tifa's master Zangan from when I played the game are quite limited, but as far as I can tell the actions of Zangan presented in this story fits the canon of the games very well and the story delivers many answers I had when I played the original game and wondered about what happened after the Nibelheim encounter.

    It takes quite many chapters to reach the erotic parts, but this kind of buildup makes sense after what Tifa experiences and I think it enhances the story and give an interesting view into what happans after Tifa is almost killed and her hometown utterly destroyed. When we get to erotic part there is clever play of actual sex scenes that fit the narrative of the story and fantasies that are smoking hot.

    Please read and review so Nickamano will write more stories!


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  • From gaiatron5 on March 29, 2020

    Much better!


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  • From gaiatron5 on March 27, 2020

    What is this?! why is this stuff not spaced at all?! its so hard to read this!


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