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November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Might miss Yunie be so kind as to elaborate on her comment? These are supposed to reviews, after all, and I most certainly do enjoy well-written and thorough negative criticism. Hopefully such is not above her talent?
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November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It's detailed and descriptive, the sex scenes are long and very well-written. I love how you keep the tone appropriately light without degenerating into horribly shallow parody. I'll be waiting for upcoming chapters.
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November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excuse me while I go yarf...
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Needs some Squall/Quistis and some more Squall/Selphie. Other then that its hot. I came... a few times actually :P