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Pedophilia... Necrophillia... but something that Seymour would do given the chance. He abuses power.

Seymour: I DO NOT!

But I oddly liked that.

one spunky blonde al bhed + one gorgeous wickedly coiffed half-human-half-guado = interesting sex.

Crap, I hate it when people are right about their criticisms :)

Only thing I really disagree with is the lover bit. I would change it so that Rikku never calls Seymour that, but I really think Seymour would be messed up enough to call her one.

And Rikku's a spunky girl. I can definately see her having such a comforting relationship with her body that she'd think in terms of "creaming her shorts."

It's pretty unlikely that she'd say the word Christ, considering the fact that their world never had him.
Also--girls don't tend to think things like 'cream my shorts.' Really.
And the Maester wouldn't be her lover--he had her once. And reluctantly on her part. He's just a little fuck, not a lover.

Well, I didn't expect ,but I like this. Normally I'm a yaoi fan, but I guess alittle het never hurt. Especially when the pairing is THIS rare. No one has ever done a Seymour/Rikku lemon, no one. So this fic is a rare gem, and I like it. Congraduations on writing such a great FFX smut fic. ^_^

Hey, being a maester is tough work. He just needed to take the edge off :)