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person Anon
schedule July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Learn to format for christ's sake
person Sprink
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Might I suggest the services of a competent beta reader? Also, another play through of the game/watching of the movie to get a better grasp of what is in character and what is out of character.

This would be an excellent stab at a first fic, however I would recommend taking to heart the adage of all writers: Show, don't tell.
person Tasha
schedule August 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story is wonderful, but Tensing should be Tseng. Keep up the excellent work.
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh Vincent came back!

I wonder what will happen next?!
person SailorPoison
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww.. ;.; that was a very sweet story.

I am not the biggest reno and Vincent fan but nice how you set up this pairing.
person DJ Link
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD, I love this story!!!!!! Your a better writer than me. Really, your a good writer. I'll read more of your work. It'll be fun. Say hi, to Sephy for me. *Huggs Steph* Bye E me me
person Aerie
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BAHAHAHA! What an interesting pair they are! .....but somehow...it works! I really liked your second chapter when CLoud bet Reno....hahahah that was great! ^__^
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww poor vincent. Well at least he gets to go to a house and not a cheap inn. Hehehehehe

I have no rrom as I put Cid into worse sexual situations.
person Amber
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ended it there?! I wanna see what happens next! It was just getting good too.
person Amber
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
((Yes I am SailorPoison ))


LOL Poor Vincent! But I bet Reno is great in bed. Hehehehehe

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