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Love Seph/Cloud Pair :) And Love your story! Please Update soon!! XxXxX

you ready to update or not!!!!!!!!!! More yaoi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really like this fic......(I think I've already said this) and I can't wait till you update. *waits till updates* do be doooooph: ph: Uh....yeah. She'll wait there for hours...days....I once saw her wait for 3 weeks for a fic to update that abanabandoned by the writer. That, my friend, is how she failed the first semester of class. I better drag her off now. Can't wait to read your next chapter. *drags Steph off to school*

~Seph and Steph~

okokok, I know you redid this, but sadly I liked it better how it was. I hate to say it, but it was better the other way. It just....seems like a little girls fantasys gone wrong and .......stuff. Sorry to be so harsh.....

~Stephanie~

Yuji: Come on I don't know why you always say you write bad
Yumi: Yeah even I liked it well it was better in the first one cause it was sad
Yuji: I liked the flashback it was cute
Yumi: I want horny lemony goodness!! Please DJ-Baby!! For us!!
Yuji: *Sigh* Pervert.
Yumi: What you want me to say Whhhaaa like you?
Yuji: HEY!!
Yumi: Thought so well talk to ya lata DJ-Baby
Yuji: We haven't called her that in awhile
Yumi: UPDATE!!!

KICK ASS FIC! I hope you update.

Totally awesome.Say do you want to be my friend.

(Sephy)You, complain. No sleep, finals...blah blah blah. You is pussy like Cloud. Tis your new name! You are now Cloud.
*shakes head* Sorry tha that. No SXC yaoi=one very angry sexy bishy.
But I will be nicer. Humans need sleep. That is true. And a good thought out fan fic IS better then a quy wry written crapppy one. It is very good so far. I, being the demanding guy that I am comand you to write more or I'll have to use the black materia to destroy you all!

(Stephanie)*slaps forhead* Sephy! Stop threatining people!!

(Sephy) But I want to read what happens next!!!!

(Stephanie) *Rolls eyes* Stop being such a brat! (uthouthor) sorry bout him, but it would be nice if a nother chapter came along within a week. It's hard to update everyday, and much sleep is needed inorder to write right. I still like your fic. And I await for you to write more *bows and drags Sephy away*

~Sephy and Steph~

That was yummy and goon. I like how Cloud's mind works. It's really nice, you've given his character more depth then alot of other fan fics have. What was that story number........*puts story on recomended reading list* there, now your one of 3. You gotta finish this, ok? Please finish this. *equips black materia* come on, I dont wanna have ta use this! Pwease update????