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for Convergence [1]: Broken

by currie

person Tricia
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, hotness abounds yet again. Good job! I'm loving Seifer. He's yummy. Though I'll be unoriginal and plead for some SxS action. Or even Z/Sq. Just put you-know-who on the bottom of any sandwich, lol. And quick updating, btw. I wish I had your speed!

Oh, and thanks for the plug. Unexpected, and very appreciated *hugs*
person Kasota
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! I just couldn't stop reading it. I hope you update soon.
person Zierra
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, some talking, some yelling and some fighting. But no fucking... Ah, well, I'll live. Hm, their relationship with eachother is more complicated that in the Big Brother house, and if there were ever three people that need grouptherapy, they're not born, made or invented yet....
Hope you'll update soon!

Hugs, Z
person hopemia
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There are. No words to describe how awesome this chapter was.
You, yourself, know, I will run away from anything even, *hinting* of Seifer/Zell.
But this!!!!!!! This..... was amazing.
I can't wait to read more.
person Anon
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Broken was one of the best fan fics i ever read. Please write more and post it. Overall job it was great and i have no critisizim.
person Zierra
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No, this doesn't suck at all. And no matter how much I'd liked to see Squall be tortured by Zell being mad at him a little while, I can't say that I dislike the turn of events. However, I think Squall's torture is far from over, at least through some perspectives. Can't complain about that either.
And maybe Zell has forgotten all about their nightly activity in the morning, and thinks he's still mad at Squall. Well, that won't really work either.... Ah, never mind. I bet it'll be great whatever you decide should happen.

Hugs, Z
person juna
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice update.
I can't wait for more.
person hopemia
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn that as good!!!! ^^

I'm so hooked on this fic, I think I check AFF.net everyday.

I'm glad that Squall and Zell made up... or at least, they did pretty much.

Can't wait for more.
person Shivey
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow ... this just gets better and better. aww, poor zell. I know you probably have to work, sleep, eat and have a life ... but plssss update! This rocks!
person Tricia
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More great stuff. I love the Seifer/Squall interaction. Everyone is wonderfully in character. Love it!

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