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for Convergence [1]: Broken

by currie

person hopeness
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... damn that was hot!!!
Seifer's just too damn hot for Squall to refused.
Yu must work on Chapter 10... now!!!!!!!!1
person hopeness
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Zelly!!!

Squall shoulda let him Seme... but, Squall is Squall.
It's hard to say "no" to Seifer. Zell couldn't. Squall can't... yet.
I feel sorry for Zell but, I don't know if I'm upset with Squall.

PLease. more.
person Zierra
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, this was just damn perfect!
I can't begint to tell you how sorry I feel for Zell, or how pissed off I am at both Seifer and Squall, but that happening - that little hope-you're-happy-now-you-asshole-thing from Zell - it was just fucking perfect!!!!!!!! Now, let Squall get tortured for a while, PLEASE, and let him feel the cold side of Zell for a while, and l wol worship you for all eternity! But I kinda shudder at all the credit Seifer´s getting...

Sorry I didn't review the other chapters, but I've been reading them - thoroughly - and I love the whole story. And really sorry for cussing, I do that when I get excited...

Hugs, Z
person Regan
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*This is Schtiel from LJ* XD This chapter [8] was so hot, wonderfully written, and so sweet at the end. ^_^ Yay for Squall getting better. *g* Seifer said he'd do it. :D Can't wait for more. *smooch!*
person hopeness
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn fine story!!!!

Seifer/Squall is soooo freakin' hot!!!!
more!!!!!!!!!!!
person wing_zeto
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing fic. I'm so glad you updated!

Very, very hot story. I love it!
person luna_light
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY,YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE THREESOMES WITH SQUALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Jessica-Lynn
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh ho ho! @.@ Stayed up really late to finish reading 1-7 and it was worth it. XD; Your writing is good, detailed, and worthy of lip-licking.
person Tricia
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ack, this is good! Very imaginative threesome, though I'm now dying for Seifer and Squall to get it on. You write a hot Seifer. I normally don't like Zell, but I like him here. Great job. Update soon!
person hopeness
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:::"I'm going to take care of you next," He purred, putting a great deal of concentration into steadying his voice, "Imagine ... just think about it, me slamming into you, stretching you so fucking wide... just like this.":::


: groans and then dies from blood loss :

Dear freakin' Hyne... that was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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