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for Heartless

by Cathrine

person Starstop
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it i hope you update it. it is differnt.
person Simon A. Erif
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story but I have to say... use spell check. You have some very interesting spelling mistakes and typos and stuff. It's not hard on the eyes but it's a bit annoying. The story is great and it would be even more enjoyable without the spelling errors and typos.
person currie
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's kind of... icky. :S
Oh, and remember to start a new paragraph when a new person talks. :)
person Passionfire17@aol.com
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Email me when u update. Oh yea this is to cute.
person Frost
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, you probably (and hopefully) already know how I feel about this fic, but since you were the only one to review my Last Exile fic, "A light in the sky", when I published it at fanfiction.net, I kinda feel obligated to make it official how much I like this fic, and the other fics you have written. I laughed when you let me pre-read "Heartless", and I laughed as I read it over again. Well done! Keep up the good work, boku no otomo-daichi... ^^
person hopeness
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It keeps getting better!!!!
person hopeness
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
: dies :
The end of chapter two was great!!!
person Jessica
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O

I LOVE IT!!!! *huggles into oblivion*

So far so good! =D YOU RULE!!!

UPDATE SOON!!! O.O

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