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for Bedtime Story No. 2

by Charmz

schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the twist in this story but I was a bit gutted when it wasn't Seifer! Poor Seifie. He's been left after Quistis agreed to give it another go!

It was a great story though :)
person squall's girl
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww..i'm touched with this fic..this is soo great! this has been the best squallxquistis fic i've ever read! i wish you would have a sequel or an epilogue of this. there are still some questions unanswered, and squall and quistis still needs some explanations to each other, etc. so please have a sequel or epilogue..pretty pleeaassse? SQUALL X QUISTIS RULE! yeah! XD
person squall's girl
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah, i forgot to tell u what chapter3 i like. honestly, i like them both, but 3B is better. yeah, i'd go for 3B because i really like the shopping mall scene where quistis kisses squall and squall kisses her back! that's when i was really sure that squall's the mystery client. ^_^ ErotiChi, you're a great writer, you rock! i hope you continue writing squallxquistis fics.
person Jake
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Howdy! I had no idea you worot this! I've read Ascending Angles and this Fic and love them both! you realy are an exceptional writer and posibely a genius!
person Streti
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naughty naughty naughty! Especially the champagne scene in 3B and the train scene... kinda like 3A better without the shopping mall scene, but I guess it links to the ending... very surprising and funny! Aww, poor Seifer...

Expertly written story, especially for an usual setting such as Quisty as a stripper. Liked very much!
person blacky
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, this story held a much more mature tone than that Rinoa bashing one. Whats with that? And whats with the porno dialogue. Then again.. this practically is porn. REally good so far. I just hope whoever this is, is who im thinkin it is..
person blacky
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This AU ROCKS!
person blacky
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The teasing was damn hot. Aw.. Im at the final chapter..
person Iceheart111
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely freaking perfect. Wonderful twist, and just the one I was hoping for. While I am a dedicated fan of Rinoa/Squall there are times when I think Quistis would have fit him better. Hit the spot, and I will say while your stories are a bit deranged ;-) I still love them.

The Demon God Iceheart gives you his blessing on your future endeavors!
person Kishana
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! All I can say is WOW!! OMG, that was so good. :)

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