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You really need to get a handle on basic English grammar, spelling and punctuation before you write another fanfiction, and that's putting it NICELY.

Aiight, that was a GREAT beginning to this story! I think you're the first person I've ever seen write a ShuShu x Lenne story! And, it was good! I'm on a WebTV right now, and yes, it does suck ass---But, grandmother's getting a new PC for me soon, so, I can write stories. Anyways, great fic! I'm currently writing a Shu/Lenne ficlet called 'When the Ocean Met the Sky', though I'm not sure if it's coming out well or not. I pray it is, though. Anyways, I loved this fic---Add a second chappie soon!

-The Great Liikii