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February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm very surprised no-one reviewed this story in such a long time. I realise it was published so long ago (6 years nearly), but I really wanted to read more!
I'm really enjoying the story so far. I like the fact that you haven't varied far from the original characters, which a lot of people seem to do.
My only complaint would be minor grammatical errors, such as “Your late” in chapter 2, but these are technicals, and not to do with how the story is written.
I only hope that you still have the work laying around somewhere so you can upload the rest. I really, really want to know what happens!
I'm really enjoying the story so far. I like the fact that you haven't varied far from the original characters, which a lot of people seem to do.
My only complaint would be minor grammatical errors, such as “Your late” in chapter 2, but these are technicals, and not to do with how the story is written.
I only hope that you still have the work laying around somewhere so you can upload the rest. I really, really want to know what happens!
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would love to reed it! All you gotta do is post it.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i realy like the story so far. realy hopping you up date some time. Zell is my alltime favorite char. so keep up the good work.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while since you've updated.Too bad, I really loved this one!!
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm liking this story! You don't ususally see someone pair Zell and Rinoa up. You're doing such a good job so far. No complaints as of yet! I hope you continue it. it.
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHERES THE SEX??