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I was quite happy when I noticed you'd finally updated. As with all your stories, this one has been quite engaging. It has been quite a treat seeing the situation spiraling out of control from everyone's point of view. The bit with Hannah, while quite unexpected, lent the story an edge that, while disturbing, was a welcome change of pace. I very much would like to see you continue this. ^_^

Wow, the characters are OOC, big time, lmao. Also, your reviews are funny. Next time you review yourself, try not to make it blantantly obvious. (Either that or your fangirls are pretending to be other people...)

yay!!I love this story!^^ its very original......but....i wanna find out how cloud was able to get pregnant in the first place it bothers me when ppl just randomly make a character pregnant without a logical explanation.....although in this story it sounds like it might have something to do with the planet or ares......also how are zach and sephiroth alive??? it would be nice to have an explanation for that as well.....all in all though if it makes me want to know those things then its really good ^^ its really well written though....you wouldn't believe the grammar atrocities that are out there.....spelling erors don't matter that much (when you type fast there are bound to be a few....)but some fics its like they don't even speak english!!!.........it was really refreshing to read keep up the good work and update so i can read more!!^^

holyfuckingmother, this is unbelievably funny!!!
lol, how the heck did cloud manage to have a thing with almost everyone? ah well...

is cloud gonna have quadruplets or something? who were the kids that he saw??

i absolutely love your stories (despite frequent grammatical errors... or is it just my comp?), you should definitely write some more!!!

keep me on your update list? :]

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Heya. It's been a long time since I've seen ya, probably because I usually hang out around the Naruto fanfiction now.

Anyway, I just wanted to congratulate you on a job well done. A holy shit!-well done job. Really. A great leap of skill from what I remember and magnificent twisty plots.

I love the little twists in each character even though I've never really played the game.
Cloud seems a whole lot more confident than from before in your one-shots. Zack seems a little bit sadistic and creepy. Did you base him from someone real?

Keep up the good work.
Myrrh fae.

This is the most entertaining FF7 yaoi fic I've ever read! Confusing at some parts but very amusing all the way.
I hope there will be more chapters to come.

Ooh! Niiiice and funny!!! Write more please! XD Lol I love the whole concept. ^^

*throws confetti* Someone else who has written FF7 MPREG! That alone makes me squeal in delight. Took me a while to get used to your Vincent; very different from what you typically see. But hey, what is fanfiction for if not experimenting? We are the ones impregnating guys, after all. :-P A different take on a character is no biggie by those terms. ^^; I see you've written that this is not the end. Well, good, because I want to see more. I'm looking forward to an update. (You gonna throw in anymore Reno? I enjoy him way more than I probably should!)

Yay! Cookie! Thank you! -^_^- I'm glad you've updated, because chappie 12 was very good. Hannah is not a Mary Sue at all, besides, she's not old enough. Are you still in hospital? I hope you get better soon!

I absolutely loved the little girl Hannah. I'm so glad Vincent was there to help her. She was adorable. Ohh Cloud is a busy boy!!* Mumbles again in the unfairness of it all* Lots of yummy angst in this chapter!! Great intense chapter.... Ohhs a cookie?? I kinda like the blonde slave boys better!! Haha!! Keep up the good work!! I hope you feel better soon!!