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I have been reading this fic on an off for a while now, and I finally got hooked during chapter 04 (I think). It really is a good fic, and I really hope that you right more!!!! Hannah is really cute ^^ and it was really cool to imagine Vincent being really gentle and all!! I also really liked the OOC part of Sephiroth and Zack, that was really funny!! And Cloud's thoughts on Reno were very touching. Good Job! And please write more!!!! ^_^ ^_^

----Sure-bu (Sue-ray--boo) (slave)

Yay! I'm so glad you updated. And I'm glad it was a long chapter too, it really made the wait worthwhile. What plans does Sephiroth have for Cloud though? oo; I can't wait for the next update!

YAY! *has been checking this periodically* Update! W00T!

I love Hannah. *pets her* Poor baby...and her poor sister...and her poor chocobo...>>; That's really sad, but I do like her. (I know how that is, the whole "poof--new character" thing. XD *has done it*) Though watching Vincent with her was cute. *squee* I dunno, men and little kids...it's just adorable. She seems to have that affect on Zack too. Neat. X3 However, when Vince came out shooting on the perverts, I was jumping up and down like "WHOOOOOOOO~!" XD *is a Vincent fan anyway* OOC at points, yes, but I liked it. Especially the image of a bleeding Vincent carrying Hannah. Sad, but sweet nonetheless. (Poor bloody chocobo...)

Cloud is being a bit of a hoe, but I hear when women get pregnant that their hormones skyrocket, so he could always use that excuse, combined with the fact that he's male. Not like guys need any more initiative to get down, especially not this lot. XD F*ck-monkeys...So, Sephiroth is under the belief that Zack will find somebody else to play with. Who, Vincent? That'd be some amusing irony, being that they hate each other...and hey! They both like Hannah. XD *is such a dork* What can I say? I'm creative...*snickers* Honestly, in my sick mind, I think it'd be cute...*laughs*

Good chapter, despite the angst (and the random Reno-bust...I swear, it reminded me of Cops, Zack kickin' the door in like that...XD) You gotta watch the typos, though. I won't point any out--because God knows I hate it when people do that to me in public. I'll just say, it might be good to do a quick read-through before you post. Y'know, to catch the bugs.

Once again, good chapter, and please update soon. ^^ (This is gonna make sense soon, right...? XD Like HOW Cloud is pregnant??? Sure hope so. Then again, what HAS to make sense?) I'll be waiting!

~Xandra

Awwww poor Hannah. Made me cry./ *sniff* Anyways great chapter I cannot wait to read what will happen next. Keep them coming ya? ^^

Wow. oO This is sorta confusing, but I like it! ^^ I sure hope this was meant to be funny, because I don't know how many times I've burst out laughing reading this. (The jealous-male posturing, the laser-tag-like fighting between Vince and Sephi, the random moogle, Cloud bathing while Zack and Seph try to kill each other..."He won't die. -_-" *laughs* Et cetera...XD) Short of a few typos, this is really good, even if it's confusing. (The dream with the children was eerie. o-o; )

Are you going to explain HOW Cloud is pregnant, being that he's male and all? oO And is Zack sticking around? I have nothing against him, I was just enjoying the random cuteness of Sephiroth and Cloud as a pairing. (The daddy-like comment about killing anybody that touched Cloud was really sweet. Squee~ ^^) I dunno, call me old-fashioned...I'm not much for threesome pairings. *shrugs* In any case, this is really good! I'm going to be watching it, so please, update it soon. *thumbs up* You've done really well, I like it a lot. Keep it up! Make the yaoi fangirl happy. ^^; And any flames you get? At this point? Jus' lemme know...*pulls out mallet* I love flamers. *evil cackle here*

I like your stuff, by the way. I've been skimming through your stories, and I like your writing style. Very interesting, and some of your phrasing is just so great. XD Kudos! But I like this one most--I'm passing the link to all my yaoi-ist friends. Please update soon, okay? ^_^ Thanks for the great read, and I'll be waiting!

~Xandra

Haha...at least Cloud isn't at the morning sickness/mood swings stage yet. When he actually gets there, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES ZACK AND SEPH!! RUNNNNN! Cloud's such a man whore...Vincent, Zack, Seph, Reno...Add in Rufus, some random OMCs, and more Turks and we can officially deem Cloud an uke. Not that he isn't one already. UPDATE SOON, DAMMIT! I NEED MOOOOOREEE! XD

Aloha! Hope you remember me, I reviewed as Sephiroth's Killer. Anyway, Gee whiz! Now Cloud's with Reno? And I'm starting to think Seph isn't the father of the baby. ^^;; Update soon please! LOVE this story!!!

Another good chapter!! Oh my, now Reno kissing Cloud!! Damn lucky assed boy!! *mumbles in the unfairness of it all, though the blonde slave boys, really sounds good, right about now* Haha poor Zack and the scary men with g-strings. *dies from the images that come to mind (x_x) * Love how you always add humor to your stories.

*Hugs* Yay you updated! Yay! *dances around* I missed this story. Anyways I think it is very good. I liked this chapter. Hey how many months or weeks is Cloud pregnate? Anways I can't wait to find out what will happen next. Till then ya? Love and Peace!

Wow!! I just love this story!!! I went from being very amused and laughing.. To ohh lucky ass Cloud.. having those 3..0,0‘(ohh) Then back to being amused.. then back to the other…Great job!! TY for the great story.. !!!!!!