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*sings* Update soon! I'm so bored. Running around the room. Please update soon.

Yes! I'm glad this update finally came! It was great byy the way. What was thhat vision with the four kids about though? I like how Cloud can only see Aeris, it's kind of funny when she's trying to help. Well I hope the next one comes a bit sooner. Thanks again!

Yes! More Ressurection! Zack and Sephiroth can't keep out of Cloud's pants XD And I'm now interested in the plot, keep on going!

i love this story. it's very well done and well thought out. *smirks* it appears that cloud has some problems at hand

that was fucking hilarious. i loved how zack and sephy kept pouncing on each other. cloud seems to be the only thing that can make them not kill each other. though they still attempt.

Yay you updated! and no why did you stop there!?! I want to read more. *Cires* Anyways man it was getting interesting, I can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon ^_^ Great job! An the four children...is Cloud going to have four kids!? O_O Okay hah I am going way out of porportion on this. Well then keep the story going ya? Till next chapter!

Uh...this was different.

Yay! You've updated!! A very good chapter, despite the fact everyone seemed to be on a sugar high -- still, I like it, so keep writing and have a nice day!

I finally gathered enough courage to read this one. I'm usually unhappy when I hear of anything relating to children of the main characters. And I kept on getting disturbed by the thoughts of Cloud having a uterus everytime somebody brings up his pregnancy XD But I'm really glad I decided to read and it did make my day. Absolutely love the 8th chapter. "WHY AREN'T YOU FUCKING DYING!?" XD Chapter 9 had me throwing giggle fits.

I ... kinda forgot to keep track or the small errors I usually place in Notepad, so I went through and skimmed it again, so I might have missed a few errors.

CH1 "C swe sweetie" (14th paragraph)
CH3 "Cloud's pret."
t." (Towards the end of the chapter)
CH6 JEHOVA (2nd paragraph of the fourth section [according to the divider ~~~].)
CH6 He moved suddenly, grabbing d’s d’s wrists (2nd to last paragraph at the end)
CH7 Cloud turned his head to the side, blushing darkly. “H-he held my hands down and-and-”

“Fuck you?” Sephiroth offered. (I think the first line should start a new paragraph. I also think that "Fuck you" should be "Fucked you." Don't quote me because I'm not an expert word use of 'fuck' >_>)

I'm looking forward to the next update :D

Yeah!! I like your fic, it's cool, yeah, keep going, keep going!!!