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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. *teary eyed*
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THat was good cant say i would ever see Sephiroth saying thring like Sweetie and babe but hey its still good. Love the writing it flows nicely which is a pleasant change from most people.
Liked it very much and i dont usually like male pregnancy fic's
Keep up the very good work and please update soon i really wanna know what happens
Liked it very much and i dont usually like male pregnancy fic's
Keep up the very good work and please update soon i really wanna know what happens
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I'm glad you updated! Dun care if it's short, glad to have known what had happened next, but also can't wait for the next one! ^_^
Regarding the typo, I looked all over and finally found it. It was in this sentence: "Did he saw anything to you? Ask you anything?" Nanaki questioned a starring at the floor in thought.
Took me a while but I finally found it x.x; Other than that, I noticed no mistakes, looked flawless to me. Please continue writing, can't wait until the next chapter!
Regarding the typo, I looked all over and finally found it. It was in this sentence: "Did he saw anything to you? Ask you anything?" Nanaki questioned a starring at the floor in thought.
Took me a while but I finally found it x.x; Other than that, I noticed no mistakes, looked flawless to me. Please continue writing, can't wait until the next chapter!
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
alright, i usually stay far away from the male pregnancy ones, but this fic had me hooked!! XD i love this cloud uke! thanks dude! hope to see more soon?
alright, i usually stay far away from the male pregnancy ones, but this fic had me hooked!! XD i love this cloud uke! thanks dude! hope to see more soon?
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay new chappie!Whoot! anyway i liked it. And we were so close to a threesome! update asap!
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heheee...honestly, I am really getting a kick out this story. Cloud got knocked-up! He's such a little jezebel...
Eagerly awaiting next chapter!
Eagerly awaiting next chapter!
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought you'd like to know...You are now, officially, my favorite author on this site. Do write more SOON! *huggles*
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cloud for two?...Cool! Yes I really wanna read that! xP
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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You've updated! *does happy dance* a month to update isn't that long. Hell, my friend didn't update for half a YEAR. But anyway, this chapter is good, like the other chapters. I really liked the sentences "WHY AREN'T YOU FUCKING DIEING!?" (though, it's suppose to be "dying" if you want to be 100% correct...), and "FUCK YOU, YOU GENETIC FREAK!" (ooh, burn ^_^). Anyway, keep writing and have a nice day! Is it going to be a three-some next?
~Birdie
PS. Just be a TINY bit careful. Stuff like "your different" is suppose to be "you're different", right? Things like these are hard to realise and the dictionary won't tell you. Ah yes, and "minuet" (minute) to name another. It's unimportant but I'm just pointing it out because I like ranting. Bye!
~Birdie
PS. Just be a TINY bit careful. Stuff like "your different" is suppose to be "you're different", right? Things like these are hard to realise and the dictionary won't tell you. Ah yes, and "minuet" (minute) to name another. It's unimportant but I'm just pointing it out because I like ranting. Bye!
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD That was funny. Cloud just taking a bath like nothing happening while the two beat the crap out of each other. Can't wait for more.