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Heh hey its me again!^^ Heh Sorry about the way I am I dunno I guess I like giving complimnets to ppl who work real hard to write wonderful fics like yours. Anyways I liked this chapter and I am shcoked at the continue Can't wait for the next chapter. I wish you good health and all. Take it easy.

My poor Sephy! MUST HAVE MORE! You should update five times a day! I'm crazy 'bout the fic! Love it, love it. LVOE IT! ^_^

Ooooo I wish I could of have read more of a battle ya? JK It is good for a short one. ^^ I like it. What will happend to the two? Who did Vincent phone? And how many months pregnate is Cloud anyways? Heh sorry I like asking questions. Keep it up!!I bet the next chapter is going to answer some of my questions and it will make me wanna read more! Nice job!Update soon ^_____________^ Oh and thank you for the dedication ^^ I feel loved now!*hugs*

I'm not quite sure what to make of this story. If it is a comedy, then it's done really poorly. While the idea in itself of Cloud getting unexpectedly pregnant is original and has a lot of entertainposspossibilities, you can't seem to decide what the situation is like. At first, the story attempts to be funny, then Cloud has a breakdown while thinking of Aeris, then it could have been funny again but simply wasn't. *shrugs*
And since I can't think of this fic as funny, I must admit you absolutely butcher the character's personalities. Don't get me wrong, I love SephxCloud or any variation thereof, but I can't get into this fic because the characters are so blantantly OOC (especially Vincent). Also, the storyline is terribly rushed and you never explain how people are getting to/from places or why... and what's this deal with the gun? What does that have to do with anything? A strange way of getting the plot bunny to run in Vincent's general direction?
I'm sorry if my review seems a little harsh, but at least I'm honest. It could have been a great fic, but it was too rushed and thought out too poorly. Well, maybe next time.

~ Ja,
Papillon

Weeee I'm glad you put chapter 3 up. I like it.....hee-hee Cloud asking Vincent to be the Godfather. How cute is that! I sooooo imagined his cute face asking Vincent that. Keep it up. And thank you for the dedication....I think it was for me right? ^_____________________________^ heh.

O.OWOWO.O MAY I PLEASE HAVE SOME MORE PLEASE^_^

WHOA! I cannot wait to see where this is going! ^^ You've got a really great idea here. Do you have this posted on FFNET? That way I can put you on my upate thingy? If not, could you email me when you update? I'd be sooo happealleally love, love, love the idea! ^_^

Oooooo I love this!!You got my attention big time!!I am so lookinrwarrward in seeing the next chapters. I wanna know what's gonna happen. ^__________^ Wonderful work....at the same time I wanna say funny....I mean cloud pregnant? But that is brilliant!! Keep it up!!

Dude!!!! This fic is awsome so far......
I want to no more...Please.....
I was so in to it...then...I was all like..*Does it have to end this way????no!!!!!*
Update soon....
and I hope your fic ends up with lots of reviews!!!!!!

Hey,
It seems you got a review from my cuzz.
hehehe...she just loves FFVII fics.
and since she was telling me about this one.
I had to read it.
This fic is cool.
I hope U update soon.
We're both looking foward to it.
Cya