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Hey,
It seems you got a review from my cuzz.
hehehe...she just loves FFVII ficsnd snd since she was telling me about this one.
I had to read it.
This fic is cool.
I hope U update soon.
We're both looking foward to it.
Cya

The idea of two men together doesen't "irk" me in anyway, however this story did. Even if this was an attempt at Parody, it's done poorly. In a Parody, you take characteristics of a person and rather than altering them, you alter their situation. An example of good Parody is done when you look at Saturdaght ght Livee che character portrayed are done so that you can instantly recognize them and usually their exaggerated features (Ronald Regan and his overbearing use of the exclamation "Well," or George W. Bush's famous plans to safeguard us from "Ter'") you have managed to mutiliate the story and the characters within it. This doesen't classify as good Alternate Universe material. You got my lowest rating. Try again.