rate_review Reviews

Beautiful!!! ToT <3

The world needs more Cid/Vincent fics, especially well-written ones like this. English might not be your first language, but you did a great job with it, especially with the dialogue. I, personally, thought the location of the waterfall cave was a little odd for a first encounter, but it works.

There were a few spelling and grammar issues, but they're easily overlooked because this was good to read right before I head off to bed. Maybe it'll give me good dreams hehehe.

CP