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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tsk tsk tsk. Is Zax never horny??? LMAO thoughthinthink this chapter was better then last coz you included more of how Cloud was feelin even if it was a little OOC. makes the story deeper instead of just horny! And remember about the *ahem?* here's the line in Chapter 2 "Zax's waist so that the boy's pale ass cheeks could rest on the giant, furry rod that was Zax's penis"
I can see why ya want to change it! I found that male writers have a particular wriitting style compared to girls. They write quickly into lemons and use different descriptions to females. I'm ramblin aren't I? Soz! ^_^
Keep up da good work!
Chandraken
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I can see why ya want to change it! I found that male writers have a particular wriitting style compared to girls. They write quickly into lemons and use different descriptions to females. I'm ramblin aren't I? Soz! ^_^
Keep up da good work!
Chandraken
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SQUEAL! ^^ I am sooo happy you added me to your recommended reading...you are so great!
And by the way, I sort of majored in humor, talking shit to my teachers all the time...I got detentions like every day for some stupid crack I made.
And by the way, I sort of majored in humor, talking shit to my teachers all the time...I got detentions like every day for some stupid crack I made.
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Smitty! Love yer work...have you considered doing a Vivi/Cloud? That might be interesting...XD And I just read your profile...bisexual and looking? Hell yeah! I'm looking too...and I love a man who's not afraid to get down with another one. ^^
C'ya later!
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C'ya later!
VVL 69