rate_review Reviews

You have done a great job developing the characters. They seem to act and talk like they should, plus you have created a wonderful atmosphere. I was very delighted of the scene with Cloud, Sephiroth and masamune. It was so refressingly new. So please: write some more! This is actually one of the best Cloud/Zax/Seph -fics I have read, and I need more.

PS. Have you ever listened to a band called Kosheen? To me it worked as great background music.

Ooooo........I am really enjoying this so far.

The rather stimulating "sword-play"......YES.

I love lemons as much as the next uber otaku fangirl, but I really don't read this fanfic for the fact that it'll be a lemon. I readt it because the plot is wonderful. As always, I loved this chapter and hope that you write the next soon. As always, if you don't I'll sic Vin on ya.
........though, it may take longer then I thought for him to walk.....or even limp.....
I just won Seph from a poker game.....and well......2 of my fav bishys + me telling them what to do = one of them neveingeing able to walk again because of all the hot lovin.

SephirothXVincent.......Proof that sometimes incest is ok.

Until next time,
~Steph~

@________@ Seph and Cloud showering. Yummy! X3Evil cliffhangers! Please! Write more! More is needed! I can't get the grin off of my faceXD Not to mention the scene with Cloud 'kissing' the blade. Yum^_^

Y-YOU WROTE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!
*Glomps/huggles/strangles from all the love she's giving the author*
*happy beyond all reasoning*
I'm so glad you wrote more!!!!
I LOVE the seccong chapter adn how Sephy-sama is!! And the 3rd is wonderful too!! I love Zacky adn Sephy and Cloudy adn even your char!! and I loved the 1st chapter....but I already reviwed that one....
BUT YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!!! CAUSE YOUR THE BESTEST AUTHOR EVER!!!!
*still jumping up and down adn squeeling like a schoolgirl despite the fact she's 17 and wouldn't be caught dead doing that*
If you continue to write, I'll continue to be honored to read it!!
*huggles and runs off, turns as he runs and yells back*
Thanks again!!!
*runs into a post*
@_@ oowww.....
*shakes it off and runs off*

~Steph~

Dude, a reply. Now you must add more chapters! If not I'm going to melt these cute chibastiastic figurines of Cloud and Sephiroth! You wouldn't want that now, would you? WOULD YOU??? Oh my god, you would wouldn't you? You sick twisted... I wanna chibi figurine of Zax... *cries*

Finally, a Zax/Seph/Cloud fic that portrays Zax as kind, Cloud as shy and Sephiroth as...well...Sephiroth! I love the fic and hope to see a lot more from ya, Vivi-Lover! Also, I loved how you actually managed to incorporate humor...That takes more talent than anything else when it comes to writing smut, if you ask me. I actually LAUGHED and didn't just groan. Keep up the awesome work!!!

this book is as funnie as hell you should write antoher make it as damn funny as this one nah make it more funnie

heyas, you say review for mote chapters, and I am revewin!!! You Shall Post More Chapters!!
Or I Will Sick Vinny On you!!!

Vincent: Someone, please end my misery........

^_^;;;;;;=j

that's what I get for borrowin Cid for a few weeks......

um...anyhoo, you must review....or once Vinny can walk...I swear, I shall sic him on you!!!!