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by Shadowgirl669

person Jenova's Puppet
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY --JENOVA IS **VERY** HOT !! HOJO TOO !!

I really hope you will write more like it !

JP
person CursedSun
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what kind of drugs are you doing?
JEnova looks like such a whore, and why anyone think she's hot is weird.
person Chibi Legin
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too bad Hojo doesn';t actually shag Jenova. Man she is hot for an alien woman
person AngelMeiru
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Jenova x Hojo pairing. I think they make THE most interesting couple.
person zEL
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thats the sickest shit ever. Jenova aint even human, and he's getting all hot and bothered watching an alien through a glass tube.
person TheOne
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was an impressive story. It is unique, I never even close to read any story with Jenova, nevermind the imagination used in this story. A little short and needs small word on grammer but besides that it's very good. I enjoyed it, even though I'm not much of a fan for males. Nice work! Keep it up!
person Kalla
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Apparently, I'm unable to log in - no error.. just won't log me in.

Anyway.

Very unique idea, and an excellent premise, and I enjoyed the ideas quite a bit.

However, there are a lot of grammar, spelling and punctuation errors. There are tense discrepencies, plus a lot of tense words that just don't exist 'builded' for instance, is not a word.
person Kupo
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was COOL!!!! Can you make another one?
person Geostigma
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Me likely. Very Hojo-ish. Very original idea too. Mucho Kudos to you.

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