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for Sudden Darkness

by Yorda

person Mya
schedule July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so good. It is so sweet please continue soon.
person mikochef22
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I'm so glad he can see Squall smile! I'm a sap I know, please I hope this is not the end, update soon, Thank You Very Much ;)
person Wolf
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay!I've been waiting so long to find out if he does get his sight back.And he does.=)What a great chapter.Continue!
person Mya
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was so good you must continue writing. I can't wait to read the next one.
person Bel
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahh this is just such a great story!! Please continue it soon. I like the way everything flows, really excellent. Nice amount of description, not draggy at all yet describing everything with enough length. I really like the way this is coming on and could kill just to read the next few chapters soon. Great work!! ^_^
person ...
schedule June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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person Porshia
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! This is just toooooooooo good! The entire blind thing was a great idea. You kinda rushed the love but I can understand. It was just waiting to happen. :D Excellent work. :P
person mikochef22
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More please soon please, these two are one of my very favorite pairings, i dont like to wait, but i guess ill have to huh?
Thank You Very Much ;)
person Lisette
schedule May 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*squee* Want more! I adore this story. I've always liked to play with the idea of how things would change if such-and-such a character had a big accident. And, yanno, Squall/Seifer is just nummy. Mmm, leather.
The story itself flows nicely, although it could flow a little slower. In real life, I doubt things would happen so quickly. But hey, it's fanfiction, so it's not that big a deal. God only knows is is much, much better than a lot of stuff I've read. Way better. Have I mentioned that I adore this story? ^.^

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