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for Irvine's Secret

by bishonenkitty

person Koji Nokemono
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Headmaster Squall.. why does that sounds so criminal? hehehehe.....

ah well I read the first chapter so I thought I'd read the rest XD


ooohhhh will Selphie get slapped around some? she should o.O maybe I should replay 8 past Garden Master NORG because I can't remember Irvine ever really into Selphie other than on the train.......

ah well I shall read on! and comment to people who have no idea what I'm talking about XD
person W.A
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what will happen? Heh I laughed at Laguna's suggestion about Rinoa acting so crazy. XD It would be creeping if all of us girls acted like that. LOL Okay anways nice job, a few errors but not many to kill the story ^^ please update real soon.
person Ri
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gasp!!! What is going to happen next! I am finally glad Irvie decided it was time!!! Please update soon! I want to know what will happen!!!!
person Jicky
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting, definitely confusing, look forward to how it turns out, want to read more IrvinexSquall scenes ;D
person Jicky
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yes btw when do stupid bitches disappear from being annoyin in the story?
person Kumachan
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o ummm.... woah *sooo freaking confused*
pleeeeease explain soon, my head is spinning @_@
or you can keep torturing Ivine... it's starting to fit too well >_>
I give it a 4 of 5! just because it needs a little more colour (but just a little) it's kind of wierd.
person Ri
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooo why did you go and cut it off there!! I want to know what will happen!! Gah! So good! Please update soon I really like this story ^^
person Pinkuneko
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sure, why the hell not. For I don't have Microsoft Word XD. I don't know what I did to it.
person Mykell
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe.... This story's full of absolutely hilarious moments! It's got quite a few typos in it though... Would you like me to edit it?
person Kumachan
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o that made no fucking sense..... Am I just stupid? Because I am soooo fucking lost, that was so totally random!!!! One minute, Squall and Irvine are all sweet and luvvy and happy, and then... AACK! M/F sex >< (don't ask XDDD)
Pleease..... update with a nice explanation for us stupid people please!!! Thank you! I like this alot!

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