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by Shehanitan

person Honey Nut Loop
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya me again. Another great chapter. Sorry i didn't review the laat chapter but my brother took the interenet modem whilst i was reading it and so i had no internet connection to review with if you get me. Anyway both chapters were fabbityfab. Shiva's a nice touch. I want her to tell Seifer at some point. At least i think i want her too. Ah the suspense.
person Yoshimi
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No I didn't get into any trouble ^_^ but I'd do it again just to read alot more of your work. Yes I loved this one like all the other ones especially now that I know more about what is happening to Squally! I really love these parings and I hope you write more wonderful work like this.
person yukiko
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's a quite hard to read fics, the feeling expalin there .... damn this is really a good fics, and I ant to be Shiva to be able to help Seifer in a way.
person MusikVibe
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You have a wonderful talent for storytelling. I'm anxious to see what turns out in the end. Great Job!
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved Shiva, loved Seifer showing how nice he can be for the right person, wanted more smut. And I saw a couple small mistakes I didn't fix my first time looking through the fic. @_@ Oh well, I guess nobody's perfect. Keep up the work, we all wanna see a good ending.

CP the hungry
person Brittny J.
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic! I love the plot. I also love the gentle side of Seifer. ^_~
person yaoi lover
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha ha.....I printed this story out and read it in my Religion class. *gets struck by lightning*
person Yoshimi
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really loved the entire thing! I usually don't review until the end of the story so sorry if you felt like some of the readers didn't care but I do. I think your writing is wonderful! I truley commend you for this type of story to me it's rare and also very hard to portray Squall like this (believe me I have tried and have failed). I really would like to know what happends next. i'm soo interested in it that I skipped school just to finish chapter 9 so please don't leave a fan in suspense!
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seifer: Wait, who says I don't wanna be Squall's Master? I know a few people who say I do....

Yeah, crazy muse. Well, I liked that chapter and I hope for more soon. I can beta for the majority of your spelling and grammar mistakes, but even I'm not perfect. Hell, that's why I have a beta. I'm a nitpicky brat like that.

Seifer: There gonna be more sex anytime soon? CP's not letting me play with Squall for some reason.

CP the crazy
person Honey Nut Loop
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this was a fantablous chapter. I loved the bizarre master twist. Made me thirst to find out the reasons behind Squall's predicament.

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