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woohoo! yeah, babes this is so hot~~~!!! XD update asap!

Maaaannnnn...... This fanfic is H-O-T...

I adore both Yazoo and Kadaj and I love this pairing, I don't wanna count them as biologically brothers so it doesn't count as incest for me... I loved it... i hope you can UPDATE soon... Three thumbs up (if i had a third hand)

I have to say this is cute and fantastic and DUDE! Words fail me. I love how affectionate Yazoo is, and the relationships between the brothers in general are so well portrayed. The only constructive criticism I can offer you is:

Obviously intoxicated as he stumbled inside, keeping a hand on the door frame for balance.

is not a complete sentence. It happens at lot, so I'd advise you to look out for sentence fragments when you proof read. I look forward to more of your fic!

I loved it! Wonderful job, you portray all of the brother's so well. Even with the incest. And if you ever feel the slightest bit guilty for the incest, you can always keep this thought on your mind (It helps me when I'm writing about them.): They don't REALLY have a mother, right? Not a flesh mother, at the least. So that means they aren't flesh brothers! They're more like...phlisophical brothers. Like how some christains call eachother brother and sister even though they arent closely related! But if you dont feel any guilt, then don't worrt about it. X3. I feel bad for Loz. No love for him (As always.)
Keep it up! Am waiting for next update. ^-^
-Lidya_Kurokawa-

Owwwwww, I ADORED it, YAZZO/KADAJ is HOT Pairing !!!! I loved the build-up !!!! @__@

You know, another chapter would be wonderful. I absolutely love this story! Its nicely spaced, and doesn't seemed rushed. It's amazing, and I would like to see more of it! ^^ Ciao.

~*Peace*~

^^ Auska.

Wow, new chapter! I still love this... Damn, now how to I rec it...?

oh my gosh you write these so well xD I love this couple, and your story is one of the few well done ones out there, so please write more soon! such yumminess x3

this is very well done, i usally dont like incest but this fic i like a lot! keep up the great work and update soon please! :D

Oh, your story is wonderful and I love it so much.
Poor Loz, he don't even know his brothers are having fun without him. hehehe.
Kadaj is so beautiful. Yazoo is so gorgeous. They both deserve each other.
Continue please