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by darksquall

schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. Let's not remind me how long it's been since I worked on Redemption, though. Loved the plot, loved the smut, and I'm falling in love with your Seifer, I think. Too bad he's obsessed with Squall. Write more soon.

CP the mopey (RL can suck)
person Lady Caos
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep, I like it. I like your so-caring Seifer...right here he's the perfect man *O* Please continue ths story SOON ;P.
Lok
person kk
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far! although i'm not sure where this is going. cid and riona are both bastards.
person pureevil230
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i loved this! you NEED TO WRITE MORE SOON!

i hope squall can kick his withdrawl and he has seifer there with him as long as he doesn't do anything dumb or 'noble'.

WRITE MORE PLEASE I WANT TO READ MORE ITS SOO GOOD!

~Kat~
person KIN Again XD
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh I felt so empty and I read your fic and



I still felt empty x.x but for the moment I'm still slightly in a right mind ^ ^; heheh

dammit you'd better as hell give them some love XD Squall would be completely broken with no chance of return if you don't....... <3
person Tsubasa No Koe
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew I'm glad that Squall didn't really do anything with that knife! The suspense of a cliffhanger!! AHHHRRRRGGG! =P please update when you can!
person Iron Dog
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love you to bits for this babe. And the fact that you stayed up so late just to feed your rabid crowd of fans *kissyhuhgs*. Now.....about that next chapter. Thanks for the good read and I think you got some good angst going on here. Keep it coming.
person Koji Nokemono not logged in
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAFFFF XD I like :3 well written *clap* heheh I kinda like their relationship, how you write it =D but you gotta make Squalliness better and get his groove on once with Seifer, even if you end them up with heartbreak *even though that'd suck dick* XP

*throws mouse at you* grrr to you..... next chapter? heheh :3
person Tsubasa No Koe
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor Squall and Seifer I hope they have a happy ending though.
person Race Ulfson
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, it was well worth the wait, you know that. One of the things I loved was "fine". It's so Squall, such a masking, pseudo-polite term and once he'd decided he was "fine" an act of Hyne wasn't going to make him change his tune. I love that Squall is all vulnerable and needy but not pathetic and clingy. I love that Seifer has the upperhand... and is still utterly at Squall's mercy.

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