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for Absolution II: Redemption

by writeright

schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was written a while back, but I don't care so I'm reviewing it anyway lol.

Not gonna lie, I was confused for a while, but for a strange reason. The first story I read by you was Fatality, and I loved it even though it made me cry >.< But then I went on to read Absolution, and because of the way Fatality ended I thought that Absolution was a continuation 0_0 And I kept thinking that until I finished the last chapter of Absolution and said out loud, "Wait a minute!!! Wasn't Irvine dead???" And then I had to go back and look through all of your summaries before I realized that I was mistaken, and that Fatality was actually written AFTER Absolution. Boy was I a mess! I thought you might find this amusing lol.

As for the story itself, I really did enjoy it, but I might have to reread it knowing that it's a separate story to get the full effect XD
person RentaiKitten
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More please!!!! Yeah, the last chapter was a little yuck (ok - a lot yuck) but *necessary* for plot so undertstandable. Hope Seifer works through his issues by the time the site is back up. Great Story!
person TWE
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this story has officially got my interest. I'm a sucker for Seifer torment, so believe me when I say that you torment him beautifully. :-D I've enjoyed reading what you've written, and I definately can't wait for more. Please do continue. :-D (Inspire me to review more ;-))
person Tsubasa No Koe
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow Ellone...why are the women around Seifer mean to him..hehe please update soon!
person Brittny
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think about four more chapters would do if you're planning to end soon.
Man, I wanted to beat up Vanessa SO bad. I was yelling at the computer. *mean angry face*
But this is still a great fic. Update ASAP!
person Yukiko
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm ... in a way seifer turned gay 'cause every women he knew used to hurt him. weird
person Brittny
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! 0_0
I've read everything and I must say... WOWOWOWOWOWOW!
Please continue!
person eerian sadow
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, cp this is great! i love you work, especially this series! i know i've never reviewed before, but i tend to be a silent reader. i just wanted to let you know that you have one more fan here, tho! i'm totally gonna check up on you so that i don't miss any updates!

eerian
person Lady Caos
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG Seifer as an uke! You're talking to my soul now, I died when Squall handcuffed him *O* I really would have liked to join....but reality sucks XD.
Yay, kinky threesome! I like threesomes (and even more-somes...I'm a perv XD). I vote for Irvine XD
Hope you write another full-of-smut chapter ( okay, I like also some plot, ya know? ^_^)
Lok
person Tsubasa No Koe
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually it was kind of soon haha I just recently got back from a trip so I just read the other chapter um this morning and then I find that it's been updated again! And this chapter wha...haha hm wonder if Seifer trusts Squall more now. Please update when you can!

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