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Seifer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!!!

YEAH!!!!! ::happy dance:: oh, i am doing my happy dance. Seifer? the seifer that i know and love...you are soooo my favorite person right now. oooohhh, i can't wait for the next update now.

It's Seifer!! Cool, I've been waiting for him to show up and show Squall who the dominant one really is. Well, that is if hegets the fever and goes all kitty-like. Was hoping for more violence and Zell mistreatment because I'm just a sick fuck like that. Oh well, it was a fun chapter and your Zell never fails to make me laugh.

CP the thoughtful

Are thay all in the same pack? Including girls?
Why is Irvine still with Selphie, he told before how unsatisfieding sex with her is. He cant even finish without thinking Squall. I hope that Selphie is not pregnent.
I can not see Squall having sex whith Selphie,Quistis or even Rinoa enymore.
I have nothing against hetro sex, I simply think that if God woud have wanted man to have sex with women, he woud have given women penises.
I hope you make girls into diffirent pack or dont make them anything.
Nida woud be plus.
Please write more.

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This was great! You have so got to continue this fic. What happens to Zell? What is that thing that was chasing him? What's going on? More, more , more. Please *begging down on bended knee*

nice action scenes, not a lot of people can write them as well as the sex scenes. I also love it when the stories are told from zell's perspective, his inner voice is really amusing. and i know i've said it before, but i really really am grateful for the fast updates.

*Really warming up to a crying Irvine* That “Sweetie, how can a girl not love a guy who’s really willing to pitch in and do half the work?” line was too cute, and so very Selphie. I'm happy for Irvine that she didn't flee to Trabia like in his dream, even though that would have promised more Irvine-eye-leakage (What can I say? I'm a sucker for guys who cry prettily. And Irvine would definitely be one of those). The idea that Selphie isn't angry with Irvine even though he had sex with Zell and Squall- Amazing. I've never thought of it like that, but Selphie's reaction show's just how close the Orphange gang is- "More like sharing a good thing, getting everyone to join in. And you know I’m always in favor of that.”- as well as how much of a pervert she can be. Poor Squall though, the bastard just doesn't know when to rest- which now makes me wonder, is he dying?! *horrified* I hope he's just... got a bad case of... *does not follow through with that thought*

I always love to read about character's like Zell, his perspective is always so energetic and so... teen. 'I saluted Quisty and stared at Xu. Gradually the dawn came and Xu saluted me. ‘Bout damn time. I wasn’t Seifer’s whipping boy for years without picking up a few pointers on how to be a prick.' - I loved that line. I could actually see that happening and couldn't stop laughing at the sun slowly rising while Zell waited for Xu to show him his due respect. The 'Mistress of Snide', 'Feel the Love!', and the 'Pleeeeease let there be a Screwaga spell! Ooooplease oplease, I’d just use it for the Powers of Good, honest!' were among the many comments that were just fucking excellent. You really catch Zell's character beautifully, making him energetic and amusingly sardonic- had me laughing at how true the things he said were and how sarcastic he could be.

And with that said, Zell's not going to... oh, ya know... DIE is he? Dead Zell is not a fun Zell, no it's not. I mean Zell's death may lead into a chain of events: Dead Zell = Dead Rinoa = Dead Squall = Much Irvine-eye-leakage (THE KITTENS MUST LIVE!) - actually, I don't like that chain of events very much. Not at all, really (except for the Irvine-eye-leakage). ZELL MUST LIVE! I'll be (nervously) waiting for the next chapter. *worried that Zell might die, say it ain't so!*

yeah! selphie isn't mad, i'm glad about that. maybe she is a big yaoi fan girl as well....maybe she can watch? hehe, i cant' wait for the next update

Eek, what's wrong with Squall? Pregnant Irvine and Selphie...oh dear, that'll be amusing when they get farther along. And, as cruel as this seems, who cares about Rinoa? I really don't care too much. Fun chapter, write more soon.

CP the bored