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Perfect,
just perfect.

Eeee! Love the fight, love the result! Now they've worked out their places with each other! I do wonder how the girls will take it though.

Yummy. The fight was good, the smut was VERY good, and Zell was fun to read. How long is this fic anyway? LOL. Yeah, I have a thing for rough sex scenes...that hit all the right mental buttons for my muses.

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*laughs at Irvine's dream* That was funny - Irvine having kitten's. At first, I was worried that you were rushing the pregnancy - safe to say, I'm very happy it was just a dream (or nightmare in Irvine's case). When Squall smacked Irvine, I laughed from shock. Then I re-read it, and laughed when Irvine started to cry... I think I'm somewhat still in shock. I mean, (out of nowhere) as soon as Irvine starts being a smartass, Squall just lands him one. And over Seifer no less. Wow, possessive much? Again, Squall's instinct gets the best of him - loved how he was just as shocked at hitting Irvine as Irvine was at being hit. Little worried that Selphie might be pregnant, wouldn't that just be scary? *shivers* As if she wasn't dangerous with that nunchaku in the first place. Who know's, she may even adopt Quistis' whip *coughSlavedrivercough*. Dominatrix Selphie - the apple of Irvine's eye. lol Anyway, great chapter! Keep it up!

HAH! that Mpreg thing came out of no where, but i'll stick around. I still think its really funny. Seifer was vaguely mentioned....is seifer gonna show up...cause i wouldn't at all be opposed at him make a guest appearence. (that wasn't very subtle was it?) oh, well, i really like the quick updates, they are a really good stress reliever during my finals week!

*drools* One of my all time fave pairing's, Squall/Zell (And Squall/Irvine, and Zell/Irvine... so yeah, this is like winning three lucky 7's). That scene. *drools again and zone's out* That was so. Oh god. DOMINANT SQUALL FOREVER! RAWR! *calm's down* Okay. Now that I've let that out, if Zell can get pregnant - I will forever be mortified. A pregnant Zell scare's me shitless (moreso than a pregnant Selphie) so yes, much mortification to be held. Hysterical laughter is also a plausible option - laughing because if I don't, *I* might faint this time. Whether Zell does end up pregnant or not *whimpers in fright*, I will still stick with this story - I'm way too attached now to turn back. Not to mention, the lemons are just too damn hot to pass up -.-

Great chapter. I hope that Squall and Zell will settle their arguments and share Irvine.
Although Zell shoud sumbit to Squall, but not be complete bottom like Irvine.
Hopefully baby is Squalls, And the NEXT Irvines baby coud be Zells.
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Loved the dream scene. Wonder how testing will turn out for the rest?

Just notice someone else's review. Want Seifer to turn up. Hope he does.

Squall X Zell, thank you! i was hoping that would happen, and i was not at all disappointed. I kinda like the idea of Squall being the bad ass alpha male and getting everyone knocked up...oh, and i really luuuvvv the quick updates