rate_review Reviews

I am borderline obsessed with this story - and yet this is my first review. *shamed*

Alright, first and foremost. I love yaoi. I love sex. You do both well. *nod* Okay, now in a less primitive manner - The very first chapter for example, absolutely sublime. Wonderful lemon and quite different from most I have read. Irvine in heat, need I say more? I loved how you made Irvine and Squall so instinctual - I read the first chapter at least 3 times just to analyze every little thing done that show's Irvine's passive-agressive submission and Squall's possessiveness. *sigh* Alpha Squall is the best Squall of all - afterall, he is like a lion and all that.

With that said, moving on to less 'base' like's - the idea for this story is quite rare for this fandom. I can honestly say that I've never read a story about the motley crew turning/gaining feline traits. I mean there's plenty of stories where Squall is compared to a feline (How cute) but, not many when he's actually *becoming* one in a sense. I've fallen for this story even more because of its originality. On a side note: I would talk about the characterization's but there's no need to. Everyone's still more or less in character. In all honesty, I've never thought of Quistis as lonely (she surely has enough admirer's) but now that I think about it, it makes perfect sense.

Finally, had no clue this would be an mpreg. Depending on which fandom I'm reading, and my mood at the time - I normally hate mpreg (because it's rarely done without a total 180 of character) and I have *never* read an mpreg for this fandom. Ever (I avoid them like the plague because it's almost always Seifer/Squall and (of course) Squall gets pregnant. Again, total 180 of character anyone?) Until now. I must admit, not placing mpreg in the summary was a really good thing and in my case, didn't have me write off the story from the very beginning. And a pregnant Irvine doesn't go against everything he is, especially in a fic of this caliber - even though it still is quite odd to think of Irvine with a swelled stomach lol

So basically, I really love this story so far and will be waiting for your next chapter. *I was never good at brevity*

Irvine is pregnent! Brilliant! mThis is great.
I hope that in the Pack of Bishounen Kittyboys Squall is the Alfa, Zell is the second and Irvine is the Bitch. Girls can have their own Pack.
Please write more.

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YES!!!!! The best MPREG yet.....Very much like how you are doing this. Keep going. ^_^

*Eeps* Umm, I don't go for MPreg fics, but I'll stay with this just to see how it turns out in the end. I liked the changing viewpoints and your Selphie is a total laugh. When I read the last line, though, I became very glad I wasn't drinking anything or it would have sprayed all over the monitor.

CP the surprised

holy shite! color me slow, but i really didn't see that one coming...

i find this fic extreeeemely interesting, so keep it up!

Shay

This is excellent! One of the best pieces of fiction I've read here for quite some time.
It flows very well and has each character's traits perfect. I never really cared for Quistis much, but I actually felt sorry for her! Go figure.
I'm not quite sure what's going on yet, but I'm sure you'll get to that :3

Awesome job! I'm going to be waiting for updates.

*Scratches head, looks all chibi-like* This fic is confuzzling me. I like the smut and the mentions of possession and ownership (yes, I'm a kinky freak and proud of it), but the plot is really confusing me. Please say it's going to start making more sense sometimes soon.

CP the discombobulated

i think this thing is really starting to get interesting, and thanks for keeping the updates posted regularly

Lovely, just lovely. I love the way you write. Kitty Irvine, Squall, and Zell is a very nice idea. I enjoy the personality of the characters. This will definitely go in my recommended reading. I'm itching to read the next chapter and see what happens!

Great Great chapter. Great story in fact. Update soon.