rate_review Reviews

Take your time hun. I said we can wait and we can. With a story this good, its worth it. Just because some of us don't have a life... I liked it. Poor Squall. His little world is being torn apart. Little puzzled over 'Vine's no-show baby. Does this mean it is Squall's (not Zell's) 'cause it's so shy and refuses to show itself? Early/late morning for me right now, so don't expect much sense. Keep pluggin' away at it. We're already waiting for the next installment.

Pff. Of COURSE it's love. Love this interlude, no matter how long I had to wait to actually read it. I like the way Squall is so protective and mad and purry and sexy. I can't wait for Seifer to throw him on his back.

I'm still reeling over all the things that are happening, and you smack me with 2 interludes (back to back no less!). Sweet Sweet Symphony (floating on euphoria). Quistis and Seifer were too damn funny, and I gushed over Zell again (I just love his personality). I was hoping for more Laguna (I reread Chapters 13 & 14 for the 5th time and have decided - Laguna should be pupped- er... loved *ahem* Much love to the Laguna that takes no shit *waves flag*), but the Squall/Irvine scene more than made up for that - guess that makes me biased lol. Irvine's being affected by an outside source isn't he? Thinking that he was just overcome by Squall's passion is good in and of itself, but its gotta be more to it than that. And how come the 'Estharian quacks' (lol @ Squall) can't find Irvine's kit? I'm still heavily anticipating the big Seifer and Squall reunion (the sparks will fly - isn't it marvelous?). Also wouldn't hurt to see some more Laguna (ack, I seem to have become addicted and this line, among others, did not help: “Er… so? I’m Laguna Loire, I’m a man, you’re a Woman, whoopdeedoo. You’re a Woman in my house who’s causing problems.” Laguna paced faster. “You’re an alien bitch who needs to jump on her broomstick and fly back wherever you came from, cuz I ain’t buying your line of crap.”) More Saucy Laguna's! More Sexy Seifer's! More Spunky(heh) Zell's, Needy Irvine's, and Possessive Squall's! More Fever! (hell more Kiros and Ward too!) I'm still addicted and my obsession won't wane anytime soon (esp. now that I have leisure time.) I'll be looking forward to what happens next!

yaaaaay *claps for IrvxSq*




I must admit I have a very ahem..... weird/kinky imagination myself? Although most of it revolves around Umed Hokuto XD but from this chapter, I've sorta thought of somethign like that before.... not quite the same

*here, I'll enlighten you XD* multiple orgasms due to some alien erm... interference


YAAAAY where's the next chapter? heheh XD I'd just like some explanations really.... you dun hafta make it all smutty and stuff but as long as you get to the explaining then I'm good ^ ^

Alpha lioness? Does that say something about how Seifer will fit in when he arrives? I'm actually hoping that it does!

Good to see a new chapter up, and don't worry too much about the delay, I personally was not bothered, I tend to be understanding about RL, writer's block and such things.

This is the first time I've actually reviewed a story, despite being a bit of a fanfiction junkie (YAOI FOREVER). I do like the way you've fleshed out the characters, especially Zell and Laguna who often come across as a bit flat. Loved the Screwaga lines and Laguna's rant at the ambassadors was hilarious. Can't wait to see how you manage the pairings later on, there are so many HOT prospects.

I dont now how anybody coud feel anything except hate and frustration for Seifer.
And Zell coud be little more sympathetic for Squall. Squall is sick and Zell´s main concern is that who woud fuck him.
And naturally Seifer does not show anything but glee and malicious delight for taking Quistis virginity by raping her.
Seifer needs to be pull down from his high horse.
Did I understand this correctly. The Fewer is Seifers fault becouse he and his posse screwd up.
Excelent chapter.
Please write more.
A LOT more.

plot!

SQUEEEE!!!!

I HATE ZELL'S GUTS!!!!

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Well... gheesh, thanks Zell... you REALLLY Love Squall!

I do adore this story..you know that.. but Zell is soooo "arrrggghhh"!
He knows Squall has all this pressure on him but, all Zell can do is think with his penis.
He doesn't even think to offer Squall any help... all he wants is sex.
Bet he'll change his tune if HE gets to top Squall.
And they call Squall self-absorbed.

Stupid Zell!

Everything else is perfect... just ( throws Zell out a window.)

*Does happy update dance* I love you. I love this fic. Now, it feels like you're really getting this rolling. Everybody is coming to one place and all hell is gonna break loose or solidarity will be reached. It'll be interesting either way. Thank you for answering how Irvine happened to get the fever in the first place. I was curious about that and how he managed to live after being wounded so badly. Great job here, keep it up.