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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh! Now we have more of the story! It makes me all the more suspicious of those two Ambassadors now.
I love the POVs - both Zell's and Seifer's were hilarious!
I love the POVs - both Zell's and Seifer's were hilarious!
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can SO picture Quistis freaking out like that, and my inner Seifer is wincing and grabbing his groin. Seifer really needs to explain himself a bit more clearly, though this is finally starting to come together in my head.
CP the hungry
CP the hungry
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pardon me for saying this but I am getting sick of waendil's anti-Seifer ranting. I just want to say I love Seifer and how you've written him. Don't compromise on him just because of one persistently negative reviewer.
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(crips corners of seat so hard it cracks) You just had to leave it there. CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!! lovelove
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter... I love you so.
Now.. Seifer needs his Squall.... so type lady, type.
Now.. Seifer needs his Squall.... so type lady, type.
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been meaning to review this for a while, simply because it is AWESOME in every aspect of the word. Who doesn't love when your favorite Final Fantasy characters turn quite litterally into sex kittens? Makes me want to curl up into a ball and purr....
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah!!!! You update too fast!! >.< I go away for a bit and come back with 4 chapters to read plus an Interlude (omfg @ Tiger!Seifer) Last time I read this, I was on... chapter 10 -.- But, fuck if chapters 11 - 14 (and The Interlude. *rawr* Tiger!Seifer) weren't excellent! I'll keep this short, don't want this turning into an essay.
Chapters 13 & 14: Awesome! The way you wrote Laguna was excellent, I had almost forgotten all about him (Despite the fact that, aliens coming to ESTHAR should have sent a few bells ringing). In fact, as of now - Laguna is my second favorite (Zell, of course, being my first) in this story, I just love the way you wrote him. I really don't know why, Laguna just never struck me as the type of person to make a bunch of 'hurrah' over (And on that list, Selphie, Quistis, Rinoa, Kiros, and Ward are in the same boat as well), meaning that he's written to be well... simple - almost one-dimensional - and definitely nothing to be enthused about; but I guess that's because Laguna is hardly written as more than an idiotic clutz. Laguna was SOMEONE, not just the President of Esthar (which can sometimes mean that he's just wallpaper in some stories). He cursed! He got angry! He was both silly and serious. He was himself and yet he was different, he was three-dimensional like he should be. Amusing all the same, still scatter-brained, and still talkative as ever (lmao @ "I guess I’ll go find a towel. Congrats on having a second chance at teenage, Kiros. You look 17. Eat something, you’re too thin. Maybe a cupcake or something, I’m hungry.” - its just like him to begin talking about something, and end (if he ever ends) speaking of something not even remotely *related* to the main topic). But also, one mean bastard when he wants to be, sarcastic as hell and surprisingly taking no-shit. He was like, the Squall version of Zell *ponders on that thought* or maybe just a Squall/Zell/Seifer hybrid... *bad thoughts* In short - I loved him, absolutely loved him.
On a side note: Kiros. Wow. I never thought of him to be vain, and he BIT Ward?! Like BITE - BIT?! I actually winced when I saw '>crunch<'. At first, I was confused, it happened so suddenly (like the Squall Bitch-Slapping Irvine segment (lol still can't get that out of my head)) but then I realized, Kiros. Bit. Ward. What a mean, selfish, bitch he is. Then again, it just seemed right to add Ward, it just wouldn't be right without the whole trio - I still think Kiros is a selfish, bitch though; all the more reason to like him, I say. Now I'll be making sure to check for updates everyday, I don't want to miss anything. As always, fantastic job! *waves flag*
Chapters 13 & 14: Awesome! The way you wrote Laguna was excellent, I had almost forgotten all about him (Despite the fact that, aliens coming to ESTHAR should have sent a few bells ringing). In fact, as of now - Laguna is my second favorite (Zell, of course, being my first) in this story, I just love the way you wrote him. I really don't know why, Laguna just never struck me as the type of person to make a bunch of 'hurrah' over (And on that list, Selphie, Quistis, Rinoa, Kiros, and Ward are in the same boat as well), meaning that he's written to be well... simple - almost one-dimensional - and definitely nothing to be enthused about; but I guess that's because Laguna is hardly written as more than an idiotic clutz. Laguna was SOMEONE, not just the President of Esthar (which can sometimes mean that he's just wallpaper in some stories). He cursed! He got angry! He was both silly and serious. He was himself and yet he was different, he was three-dimensional like he should be. Amusing all the same, still scatter-brained, and still talkative as ever (lmao @ "I guess I’ll go find a towel. Congrats on having a second chance at teenage, Kiros. You look 17. Eat something, you’re too thin. Maybe a cupcake or something, I’m hungry.” - its just like him to begin talking about something, and end (if he ever ends) speaking of something not even remotely *related* to the main topic). But also, one mean bastard when he wants to be, sarcastic as hell and surprisingly taking no-shit. He was like, the Squall version of Zell *ponders on that thought* or maybe just a Squall/Zell/Seifer hybrid... *bad thoughts* In short - I loved him, absolutely loved him.
On a side note: Kiros. Wow. I never thought of him to be vain, and he BIT Ward?! Like BITE - BIT?! I actually winced when I saw '>crunch<'. At first, I was confused, it happened so suddenly (like the Squall Bitch-Slapping Irvine segment (lol still can't get that out of my head)) but then I realized, Kiros. Bit. Ward. What a mean, selfish, bitch he is. Then again, it just seemed right to add Ward, it just wouldn't be right without the whole trio - I still think Kiros is a selfish, bitch though; all the more reason to like him, I say. Now I'll be making sure to check for updates everyday, I don't want to miss anything. As always, fantastic job! *waves flag*
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeeee! New chapter! Yaaaaaay!
Hee! I *love* how Laguna talked those two aliens down! Stuck-up things! They *really* expected the same customs when they came to visit another world? Yeesh!
And Kiros and Ward! Cyoot! That whole scene is really sweet, Ward's such a sweet sorta guy and Kiros biting him! LOL!
I'm still waiting to see how things go down when Seifer gets there! I'm starting to see an outline of One Big Happy Family (which I kinda love the idea of to death!) and I really wanna see how the family heirachy works out!
I hope you can post more soon!
Hee! I *love* how Laguna talked those two aliens down! Stuck-up things! They *really* expected the same customs when they came to visit another world? Yeesh!
And Kiros and Ward! Cyoot! That whole scene is really sweet, Ward's such a sweet sorta guy and Kiros biting him! LOL!
I'm still waiting to see how things go down when Seifer gets there! I'm starting to see an outline of One Big Happy Family (which I kinda love the idea of to death!) and I really wanna see how the family heirachy works out!
I hope you can post more soon!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excelent chapter.
It is starting to make sense.
Selphie and Irvine taking care of Squall together, so sweet.
I hope that Squall will get his Zell back soon. After all Zell has been hoping to be with Squall for so long, and now he is drugged and Seifers toy.
Please write more.
Ps. Some Squall/Zell/Irvine Fever smut woud be great.
http://www.freewebs.com/waendil/
It is starting to make sense.
Selphie and Irvine taking care of Squall together, so sweet.
I hope that Squall will get his Zell back soon. After all Zell has been hoping to be with Squall for so long, and now he is drugged and Seifers toy.
Please write more.
Ps. Some Squall/Zell/Irvine Fever smut woud be great.
http://www.freewebs.com/waendil/
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaah!!!! *Glomps* I so love this! I haven't read this part before....
I WANT MOOOOOOOORE!! ...Please? ^____^ I really, really like this fic.
It's one of a kind! I love the plot, and the smut, ya should never forget
the smut. ^___^ And Kiros rocks! lol. He chomped dowm on Wards had!
And he's so vain! I think that's a great way to portray Kiros.
*Huggles*
Please update soooooooon! ^____^ You have a ton of fans who want more!
I WANT MOOOOOOOORE!! ...Please? ^____^ I really, really like this fic.
It's one of a kind! I love the plot, and the smut, ya should never forget
the smut. ^___^ And Kiros rocks! lol. He chomped dowm on Wards had!
And he's so vain! I think that's a great way to portray Kiros.
*Huggles*
Please update soooooooon! ^____^ You have a ton of fans who want more!