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for It All Started With A Materia

by Hotaru1421

person Emey
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is laughing her ass off* i can see that.....seph running around with his pants on fire. that would need to be on funniest game moments or something.
person ZombieDuke
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOO! slightly OC original character! I like! ;) Keep the chapters comin' luv!
person Ashley
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great chappy/two chappys...well you get my point ^.^ Very funny in the last one. Update soon!
person Bleuwyn
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry now I'm not going to be nice. Reposting a fic, just because you didn't like the reviews you got is sad. Now I would understand if you reposted because you edited. Don't waste people's time. Take the reviews you got like a man or woman, whichever falls into your case.
person Anon
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Next time, take it off the site and DON'T repost it. Do us that favor.

Word to the not-so-wise: Self Inserts suck in general, and ones involving you and the World's Greatest Pussy (Sephiroth) are worse still.
person Cwolf
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Self-Insertions are a big no-no. They only breed horrible OOCness, totally asinine plots and poor development. I've seen this fic around before and it really needed a lot of work, and it still does I see. Next time if you repost at least attempt to edit it. The is a poor example of writing, maybe you should take some time off (to grow up) before posting something else.

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