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by KSipesh

schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've read this, but did I not review this?? What the fuck is wrong with me?!
Anyhoo... This kicked ass!! Vince totally made Cid his bitch. Hehehe... he had it coming.
Uh... no pun intended.
If I hadn't already a million times after your other stories, I'd propose marriage. :D
person kasey
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it.
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey that fanfic was awesome, man i wish i was as good of a fanfictionist as you are , but hey... everyone has their qualites, you should make more chapters to this fic i'll gladly read them .... i thuroughly enjoyed this fanfic and i would love to read more of it!! :D

Melody (aka ) Enzanshellbrokenangel
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! And dark! And a great many cold, dangerous things. I like how it felt just shy of outright violence.
person Cidsa
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good :D
Personally, I like this pairing when it's sweeter, but this was good too.
Please write more, I'd love to see it become happy (I'm a sucker for happy endings, hehe)
person Auron Revolutionist on AFF.net
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Vincent! That was hot! Hooray Fetus!
person Ezriee
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh that was so sad...i wanted nothing more that to hold Vincent and tell him it would be okay. Great job though *cuddles Vincent*
person FullMetalBlunt
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, absolutely beautiful. I am in awe-struck wonder... O_O

For all the cry-baby Vincent's and ass-kissing Cid's out there, you showed them how it's done. I think that was truly how it would be, in character. I thank you so much for this fic, amazing job! ^_^

*shakes sake jug at Vincent*
person Germaine
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Wow... Angsty. Beautiful. Bravo.
person An Anonymous Tipster
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was metaphorical punch to the gut... I mean that in a good way. Two things, though. You need to add a disclaimer and put a non-con tag (look under Story Codes if you don't know what I'm talking about.) I know I must souind like a nag, but I don't want to see such an awesome get deleted! :)

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