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for Christmas in July

by ZombieDuke

person unknown
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh, my review got cutoff, I just noticed. Well, I think what I wrote was that I hadn't seen you write Zack for the longest time and I was glad to see him in this chapter. I also hope for more to come :P
person unknown
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I'm so glad you updated this <3 I love your Zack. You haven't wrote much with him lately, so I'm glad to see a bit more of him in this chapter XD I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
person Minako
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
Ah so dose Zack and Sephiroth share Cloud as a lover?...*lol* that would be cute!...but yeah is Rudy going to remind Reno to tell Tseng about Cloud lost memory?...and what well Reno have planed to get close to Cloud?...and who well Sell Cloud with Reno and tell a over Jelous Zack?...but yeah Reno/Cloud are a good couple but yeah I am not a Big Tifa fan also but what about Aeris since she was souposed to be Zack Ex-Girlfreind in the begging of the game but you don't have to add her or maybe Hojo or Scarlet or even Rufus him safe...can show up I know Hojo would love to get his hands on a confused Cloud fore his subject...(As we pray that never happnes...)but yeah good luck with this one.

tbc...?
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell--I do not want nothing ripped off! *Holds onto stuffs* I am a good/sweet reviewer! *Whew* I am not for sure if this is what you are wanting, but if you check the top of the screen, and go under FAQ, then to story codes, it has the info for italics. I copy and paste, and use the italic codes for my stuff.~~ Anyways--Poor Zack, he is really freaking out. I cannot wait to see more of this! Please!
person squalmasy
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
D:!!! Ohnoes! Bring on the shonen-ai! And, poor Zack, he worries like he's a woman or something. Who's a sweet little guy, eh?? *coos and pets his head*

YOW!

*Zack's hair pierces her flesh*

....o_o

XD Update soon, and update longer! I am dying for more. >:D
person claire
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon!
person Kumi
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kyyyaaaaah!!!~~ *hugs and smoochies* You are ZE greatest! You really are! *awards you with a trophy* I love you so much I could cry ;_; I'm so thankful, words can't express my gratitude! XD It's great to know it aint gonna rott. I believe you, I really do, but now that I can, I'll just make sure it wont! *eyes*

As expected, that was a nicely written, dealt with chapter. Although there were some typos along the way, but that's okay, not everybody's perfect~ *just can't stop hugging you* I really can't wait to see what happens next, and how Zack will take the whole ordeal XD
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see a long list of interesting possibilities, myself... Whee!!!
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you referenced your other stories, when Reno was thinking about how to tell Cloud that he knew him! I really like this one. You always add humor to your stories. Love that!! Ohhs 2 reviews from me in 1 day!! Hope to see more soon!
person ShadowIcia
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like Reno in this. I wonder what Zack's gonna do when he finds what happened to his poor Cloudy.

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