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omg I LOVE creepy Tseng! He is just SOOO funny!!! *huggles for author*

This is great.
Update please. *sparkly eyes*

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Awwwwwwwwwww I love it when Rufus gets mad! He's so cute!!!!

Fun story. I love your Rufus. *Slaps with fish* More, now.

CP the content

Rufus: I had this image in my head of Tseng running for his life from 10 stampeding Chocobos. While the others just simply pointed and laughed
at his expense. My how I’d wished I’d been there to see that.
*laughing* I can actually picture chibis. Man. I bet Reno had a grand time. I mean pink chocobos? Hahaha!
Poor Tseng. I still love you! *clings to him*
Anyway, great job. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Lol. My Mom acts like Rufus when she is at work.
So I can sorta relate to his stress..
Keep up the good work!

this is pretty cool, i dont know why you jibber on about not being able to write... theres a few spelling errors a few grammer mistakes.. BUT WHO THE HELL CARES... just because it isnt technically correct doesnt make it bad. the ideas behind it are strong, and you have made the characters act and speak in the way that they actually would.. none of this making tseng a nancy boy, or making Rufus feminine... anyways great story look forward to reading more... just dont cock up on any of the upcoming love scenes if you write any *grins* you know what i mean.