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by Tyranid121

person Real
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok bad man. Just bad. Writing a paragraph is not a chapter and you don't need to doublespace the sentences.
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, you wanted pointer.

*First of all, let it flow.
*Descriptions are good, but don't overdo them. Sometimes it's better to be concise.
*Write what pleases you. If you aren't pleased with it, there's little chance others will be.
*Act your characters out. It helps. You'll get the feel for them.

That's all for now, and thanks for mentioning me. It's good exposure. ;)
person jozepy
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!
new vivi fic new vivi fic
i am so happy that their is a new vivi fic
please for the love for god continued

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