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June 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM
this story is very romantic and very hot there are not to many storys of this couple please write more with the same passion.
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The background story was too brief, but it was good otherwise.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed that.. that pairing never occurred to me, but really, it's perfect.
Like a variation on the whole "The Knight loves the Princess" thing we'll find in heterosexual fairy-tails.
I see Beatrix as a bit more dominating as their relationship flourishes, and I wonder if that's just my inner pervert or what, lol.
But thank you so much for writing this - it's an inspiration to potential Yuri writers out there, who only need a decent example to set them on their way.
If you considered continuing, tossing in a little bit of drama if only to expose more nuances to that kind of love in a lesbian situation, I personally would be honored and thrilled to read more.
Thank you! Well done!!
- DeeDubya
Like a variation on the whole "The Knight loves the Princess" thing we'll find in heterosexual fairy-tails.
I see Beatrix as a bit more dominating as their relationship flourishes, and I wonder if that's just my inner pervert or what, lol.
But thank you so much for writing this - it's an inspiration to potential Yuri writers out there, who only need a decent example to set them on their way.
If you considered continuing, tossing in a little bit of drama if only to expose more nuances to that kind of love in a lesbian situation, I personally would be honored and thrilled to read more.
Thank you! Well done!!
- DeeDubya
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good, not my favorite pairing, but good nonetheless.