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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so rarely read/enjoy CidVin fics, but this was really good. A million thanks for not making Vincent weepy. Character personality is really the biggest factor in whether or not I can stick with a story I'm reading. And they were both just so likable, you had no trouble convincing me of the possibility of the scene. I especially liked the easy comfort between the two at the end, the shared cigarette and coming to the line where Vincent had to pry his gauntlet from the chair tipped me off before the marks left were explicitly stated, and I smiled when I caught that. Only criticism I can think of is that you have a cigarette in Cid's hand, and then suddenly both of his hands are on Vincent. It's hard to tell exactly how much time has elapsed between the cigarette and Vincent's removing his arm from the chair, but it kind of tripped my brain up enough that I noticed and wondered when he put it out.
I have to say, this is my favorite of any CidVin I've read. There's really only one m/m pairing I get into, and this wasn't it, so I didn't expect to enjoy it this much. But the story kept me hooked and even blushing. Yeah, I have to say it ranks way up there.
I have to say, this is my favorite of any CidVin I've read. There's really only one m/m pairing I get into, and this wasn't it, so I didn't expect to enjoy it this much. But the story kept me hooked and even blushing. Yeah, I have to say it ranks way up there.
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely story. X3 Non-emo Vincent is a rare treat.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, you got a way to write nice hot fics! XD X3
i definitively liked the way you presented the situation. nice visuals ;P
i definitively liked the way you presented the situation. nice visuals ;P
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
huzzah! an angst free Vincent!
<3'd it muchly
<3'd it muchly
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was the best Cid/Vincent fic I have ever read. I am so happy that Vincent wasn't morbid or angsty. Thank god!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! Enjoyed it :P
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhh that was good! I hate weepy uke Vincents!!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOTTT.
People always make Vincent so whiney, but he's perfect here. Good job!
People always make Vincent so whiney, but he's perfect here. Good job!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Drools all over anything* I can't think of anything else to say. Nonangsty Vincent is a little odd to me, but it worked well here and your Cid was fabulous. Very hot.
CP the perv
CP the perv