rate_review Reviews

I like how you've incorporated the game script into your fanfic! Very nicely done and it shows good effort. XD

Lol, I love the witty banter. Very well written and it really gets funnier as it goes on. XD I like how you write the dialogues between Reno and Rude.

Aww don't worry about it. I think Chapter 5 is totally fine. XD Nice chapter!

Oh my gosh. Please update this quickly! I'm dying to read the rest! Don't torture us readers now!

This story is really awesome! I love the detail and the characterization, it's really canon and believeable. Not to mention the fact that I, myself, think that MPreg are extremly underrated and they need more respect in the fiction world, and hopefully they can with good fics like this ^_^ Good work, keep it up!

Aww Reno. Loving this fic. I didn't think anything was wrong with this chapter at all. I love how you write Reno. I'm sure him knocked up can be hard. Can't wait until your next update, love this to death!

This chapter definitely had a different feel to it than the others, but it wasn't bad by any means. I thought one of your scenes ended a little abruptly but other than that, it was another great chapter.

OMFG... XD It's just so funny... and as it's happening during the game, and not after, I find it all very amusing. Poor Reno... But I love it when he and Elena talk. "Godmother?" XD

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"What?" Reno asked, somewhat snippy, pulling apart his hamburger and flinging the tomato slice over his shoulder, not caring where it landed.

"What's wrong?"

"I don't like tomato."

Elena shook her head. "That's not what I'm talking about."

Tseng and Rude ate in silence.

"I know something's bothering you." Elena insisted, picking at her salad.

"Mmm hmm." Reno muttered.

"And I want to know what that something is."

"I can still taste the tomato. I know it was there." Reno mumbled.
-UNQUOTE-

This, my friend, is a work of pure genius. You SO got Reno and the chemistry between him and others down pat. And it's frickin' funny!

I'm glad this story is finally getting some well-deserved reviews. It's incredibly unique. It's wholly believable, strange as that may sound. I loved how you incorporated the sense materia into the story. The character relationships are well represented and each scene is beautifully written. Better to be nonspecific than overly specific and make a careless mistake, I say. I find nothing wrong with your timeline. Can't wait to read more.