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for My Broken China Doll

by User0007

person silver
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh dear, poor Yazoo!
person LordIckarous
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...........!
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Thats was really weird... but.... AWSOME!!! More More!!!! Great Idea!! *gives you hi 5's* ^_~
person silver
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor Yazoo! he is having a very hard time!
person Insecurity
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(lazy...Don't feel like logging in today but I MUST review!)That was a really interesting chapter! Poor Yazoo but at least he partially enjoyed it this time.
So sad that Kadaj died! V_V I wonder why Vincent does it. I hope Yazoo comes out of this depression. Please update soon...I'm hooked on this story^^.
person sephslover
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another great chapter. The ecchi scene was absolutely delicious. XD
person Crimson
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely handled I think. I just want to hug Yazoo, and yet...I love when Vincent gets the better of him. Nice of you to have Vincent comment on the 'why' in that way--having his secrets, getting to act how no one expects him to. Nice. I still can't believe Kadaj is dead, but since Vincent gave Yazoo a sort of way out, and Yazoo does get that their cause is hopeless...I don't know, but it sure would be intersted if they did decide to give up and 'repent'. I don't know where you plan to take things from here, but I am more than ready to read another part if you write it.
person yaoimaster
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG.

This is like the best ever!!!!

You're doing good, friend.

//That'll do pig. That'll do.//
person KereiKitsune
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>_> you must continue! They're a bit ooc but meh. I feel so bad for Yazoo ;_;
person LordIckarous
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow..i didn't see that coming..Cool!^_^ Update pleaaaase!

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