rate_review Reviews

waiting anxiously for the next chap. Im really liking this fic. bad bad vinny. But I think he and Yazoo make a good couple(evil grin).I had already saw a fanart between them. HUGS YAZOO AND COMFORT HIM...KEEP WITH IT, PRETTY PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

Very nice fanfic. Hope to see another chapter soon. :)

Oh, don't be so modest. You ARE a good writer, and your fanfic's becoming more and more exciting.
I was afraid you'd get discouraged by some review but fortunately you were not.
Keep going please. ^^

I like it. There are some issues with sentence construction, but overall the grammar is decent and the story is fairly easy to follow. There's not much exposition of the plot yet, but it's just the beginning. I'd like to see what Vincent's reason was, if he had one. Yazoo's shame and Loz's anger at what has happened is coming across very well. Fanfiction is different things to different people and we're not all militant fandom purists. Sometimes a bit of eye candy smut is all I want. Your fic has that and shows potential for becoming something more. I definitely got the kind of thrill I come to this site for out of your fic.

I actually thought about how fun it would be with a V/Y pairing when I read this thing. Nice!

I don't know why, but I really liked that. I know Vincent would never do something like this, and yet...I still enjoyed every minute. Well written, especially from Yazoo's point of view. He's my favorite of the trio, and you did him justice, I do believe. I would certainly read it if you continued this.

That was awsome!! Please continue. Maybe Loz and Kadaj could revenge their brother and hurt one of Vincents friends this time? (well I´m not sure Vin has friends. I mean the characters he travels with in ff7. I´m not finished playing it yet. But I have seen the movie though. Oh now I´m rambling on and on. Sorry!) Update please :-)

I loved this one!!! MORE!!! Give ous MORE!!! :)

Nya! This was a really good story! Please do another chapter or something! Wonderfully done! ^___^ *huggles Yazoo*

I thought you did a good job on this. I almost fell off my chair, as I am right in the middle of writing a Vin/Yazoo dark fic, with Vincent being the dark one. Its nice to see someone else doing a different take on him. Please continue on with this!!