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Yes!! Please continue!! Don't leave it just like that! I like how you write so please do write more! ^_^

-Gasp- You have to continue, my Aniki would love you. You see, I roleplay Kadaj on Yahoo, and I have Yazoo and all that....my Yazoo is totally obsessed with Vincent...seeing a well-written fanfiction would make his day. ;-; Please continue! I'll give you cookies....!!!!

^_^ That was good, I really liked it. I'd toyed with the idea of a Yazu/Vincent relationship, but it never went anywhere. I hope you continue this story. @_@ Eee, short review, but I don't know what else to say.

Sorry, winter, but saying it's just fan faction and we can do what we want doesn't fly. Fan fiction is no excuse to take characters people love and twist them to suit the author's own personal fantasies. That's what original fiction is for.

Leaving a review of a story you like and I don't makes me a poor and negative person? Tell that to the many authors whose work I've liked and told so.

Please explain the don't like, don't read rule? How do you know if you like it until you read it?

I know this is all a waste of time since my original review has magically disappeared and all that's left are reviews praising this work. How sad, final.

That is all.

for sure you should update,it was so fluffy the scene between Yazoo and Loz. but vincent was pretty bad..., Well hope you update soon and dont forget this fic like many authors do.So please, i liked it sooooooooooo muuuuuuuuuuch.I LOVE the SHM specially Yaz(such a bishonen).

*screetch* continuuuuuuee

;______; poor Yazoo!!!
I would love it if you continured this, it has potential! And while I looove Vincent.........
Have loz kill him in the most painful way imaginable >_____>

First off, Lillie. There is this wonderful thing called fanfiction. I bet you've heard of it right? Fanfiction is where anything can happen based on what that author and readers would like to see. Sure they should have an OOC warning, but otherwise you shouldn't comment. It seems to me that you are a pretty poor and negative person. Also theres the fact, if you don't like it, don't read it. Those same rules go for every fanfic.

Personally, I liked this fanfic. There were a few grammar issues, but that's ok. The idea was interesting, especially thinking about Vincent raping someone. I've only seen stuff like that a few times before. Though, you did have me confused on which brother it was. I was possitive that it was Kadaj. In a way I'm glad it was Yazoo... because theres not any fanfics with him as of yet. At least, not from what I've seen.

I'd love to see more.
-J-chan

Oh, please continue. I liked sooooo much to see Yazoo that soft and vulnerable. And, on the other hand, to see Vincent that mean and rough. That's something you don't see everyday. ^^

WONDERFUL! MORE MORE!