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Banned from the computer?
not good
*shakes head*
i think i would combust...well not really, i do have a bunch of manga i am getting behind on so...
but that really stinkes that you are banned from the computer,i am glad that you are still writing though!!
go go go!
^_^

until the computer gods deem you well enough to use their power once again,

Shiri Matakami
Lord of Fish

Toast?
i like toast
^_^
heh, i think cloud should get put in a dress, have reno almost molest him to death then have sephy come and take him away to have hot kinky sex with him. that would make my week.
^_^
i am really glad that you updated and i love the chapter to peices, but your writting seemed a little scattered, and i was uber confused a few times. if you organise your writting a little it will be that much more of a fun reading experience!
...
now that i have made sense i must go join sephiroth and his toast!

-Shiri Matakami
Lord of Fish

....

*eats toast*

I was laughing so hard I almost cried.
Thank you.

Oooh yeah, baby, bring it on!!!! >:D

YAY!!!

I MISSED YOU!

HUGGLES FOR ALL! :-D

*stragles internet*
ya, mine like to die on randomly too, it really likes doing it over breaks, and summer vacations
x.x
i just love it sooooooooooooo much!
>.<
i am so sorry that your internet is being mean, i am very glad that you put up a note saying that you have accually wanted to go on the internet and not just saying it when you post the chapter.
it makes you seem more responsible then a lot of the other authors on this site.
^_^
hope you had a great holiday!
can't wait for the next chapter!

-Shiri Matakami
Lord of Fish

Please keep writing!!! I just got into it and it stopped. You have to finish this one, it's brilliant!!!

XD ROFL That was so hilarious. I'm glad you wrote more! The last paragraph was so great; I started cracking up. ^_^ Update soon, hon, and IM me!

~roxi

CLOUDY!!!!
i *heart* him!
this sound just like my school, besides the whole people hitting on me.
that is like non exsistant x.x
i really like it how reno is a wigger, hehe i can imagine him as one...well theirs not much to imagine, he was already one ^-^
i liked the chapter, but i do not like how it took like a year to write (not really but it felt like one)
you have a really cool writting style and i can't wait to read more. i love how you wrote cloud and i like how you have tifa not interested in cloud, it makes me *heart* you and this story now. i don't have anything agaisnt the girl but i think that guys molesting guys is soooooooo much better ^_^
ITS VINNY!!!! if he is having a student teacher relationship with hojo i will be forced to make hojo eat his own toes. if you get the vinny you do not abuse the vinny. that is my saying and i stick to it! *hugs Dirge of Cerberus wall scroll* hes soooooo PRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTYYYY!!!
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*shifty eyes* this is a review, sure it is!
if you update sooner then you did last time i'll give you a cookie and my undieing love for your writing style!!!

Shiri Matakami
Lord of Fish
^_^

When I first read the intro I was a little, just a little, bit worried. But I hope you'll forgive me. My God I love this, I could see it, angsty cutter vinnie, Reno, Rude and Zack as wiggers, and Sephiroth being ... Sephiroth, and sweet, weird Cloud, being sweet weird Cloud killing carbon copy whores......
you better write more, I may pout........