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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol kawaii
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
i really really liked this story, it made me laugh. a lot. i really like how you set stuff up for other chapters. i also think that you will give me another reason to want to smuther Zack with hugs. i have loved zack and i always will love zack. even when i was 7 and my sister defeated the game for the first time, i still loved zack. yet i was the only one to like notice him in my family, weird, since they all played the game..... i had to point him to my brother when he replayed it, this was of course after i beat the crap out of him for forgetting the most important person in the game, besides Sephy that is.
my seven year old mind was also able to comprehend that Sephiroth was one of the good guys....i was an odd kid that i was.
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now that i have told you my life story i will beg you to update this soon so i can read more of the funny and finally be able to read a story about cloud that doesn't have him as this little wimp, that really pisses me off sometimes. i mean come on people, is cloudy can beat the crap out of big bad sephy then he should be able to be a little more manly, right?
anyho, all my favorite people seem to be playing a nice role the way you have set them up. i wish for you to update soon, becuase new chapter are like drugs to me, when a story updates i am nice and calm and then i get hyper and go around screaming outside and then i go back to calm. i also scare the crap out of my family while doing this so i try to read stories that update often so i can keep them on their toes.
so,
it would be very nice of you to update this wonderfully funny story so i can go scare random strangers and my family,
Shiri Matakami
Lord of Fish~
p.s. i loved your beginning and how its like cloud narrating the story, it makes it so much better ^_^
i really really liked this story, it made me laugh. a lot. i really like how you set stuff up for other chapters. i also think that you will give me another reason to want to smuther Zack with hugs. i have loved zack and i always will love zack. even when i was 7 and my sister defeated the game for the first time, i still loved zack. yet i was the only one to like notice him in my family, weird, since they all played the game..... i had to point him to my brother when he replayed it, this was of course after i beat the crap out of him for forgetting the most important person in the game, besides Sephy that is.
my seven year old mind was also able to comprehend that Sephiroth was one of the good guys....i was an odd kid that i was.
....
now that i have told you my life story i will beg you to update this soon so i can read more of the funny and finally be able to read a story about cloud that doesn't have him as this little wimp, that really pisses me off sometimes. i mean come on people, is cloudy can beat the crap out of big bad sephy then he should be able to be a little more manly, right?
anyho, all my favorite people seem to be playing a nice role the way you have set them up. i wish for you to update soon, becuase new chapter are like drugs to me, when a story updates i am nice and calm and then i get hyper and go around screaming outside and then i go back to calm. i also scare the crap out of my family while doing this so i try to read stories that update often so i can keep them on their toes.
so,
it would be very nice of you to update this wonderfully funny story so i can go scare random strangers and my family,
Shiri Matakami
Lord of Fish~
p.s. i loved your beginning and how its like cloud narrating the story, it makes it so much better ^_^
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL.. heh.. it´s cool.. i like the fact of Cloud being a Angsty guy xD...i like your fanfic.. i hope you´ll continue.. i´ll take this chapter like an introduccion to the fanfic.. like giving to know the personality of the main character.. oh! and try to make chapters longer xD
(sorry if you don´t understand my review im a german Girl practicing her english ^^U)
(sorry if you don´t understand my review im a german Girl practicing her english ^^U)
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey hey there! :)
I don't normally find myself reading AU, OOC fanfiction but it happens; and I thought I'd letcha know that I'm *so* curious to see how you'll develop this all up. Becasue *Sephiroth* as a *WIGGER*?! XD I'm all up to seeing THAT hilarious load of goodness. Zack I could more than imagine as one, probably Reno as well, but Seph?! XD!! Oh, I have to see this!!
Thanks for writing this! Hope to see an update from ya soon!
I don't normally find myself reading AU, OOC fanfiction but it happens; and I thought I'd letcha know that I'm *so* curious to see how you'll develop this all up. Becasue *Sephiroth* as a *WIGGER*?! XD I'm all up to seeing THAT hilarious load of goodness. Zack I could more than imagine as one, probably Reno as well, but Seph?! XD!! Oh, I have to see this!!
Thanks for writing this! Hope to see an update from ya soon!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEllo my love. you did have some grammar issues but thats okay. anyways if sephy is freinds with zack then does that mean that sephs at clouds house sometimes, like hangin out. anyways very nice very funny and i like the hair gel line. call you in a sec.
cat>^.^<
cat>^.^<